Composition

2013-09-05 · 첨삭 강사 Giselle

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I think giving specific direction is better to do the project. If we don't have any infomation about the project, We have to figure it out from A to Z. So we can't focus on this subject. We have to gather the infomation of this form not point. It wastes time.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]! Thank you for taking your time in sharing your ideas. A good leader must indeed direct his subordinates by giving them clear and specific directions. I hope you are having a great evening. See you later. ~ T. Giselle   I think giving specific direction is better to do the project.>> I think giving specific direction is better than letting them do the project.If we don\'t have any infomation about the project, We have to figure it out from A to Z.>> Correct.So we can\'t focus on this subject.>> Correct.We have to gather the infomation of this form not point.>> Correct.It wastes time. >> Correct.

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