Composition
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I think giving specific direction is better to do the project.
If we don't have any infomation about the project,
We have to figure it out from A to Z.
So we can't focus on this subject.
We have to gather the infomation of this form not point.
It wastes time.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!
Thank you for taking your time in sharing your ideas.
A good leader must indeed direct his subordinates by giving them clear and specific directions.
I hope you are having a great evening.
See you later.
~ T. Giselle
I think giving specific direction is better to do the project.>> I think giving specific direction is better than letting them do the project.If we don\'t have any infomation about the project, We have to figure it out from A to Z.>> Correct.So we can\'t focus on this subject.>> Correct.We have to gather the infomation of this form not point.>> Correct.It wastes time. >> Correct.
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