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Dear [Name]. [Name] It's a good day. Let's start!! Dear [Name]. [Name] evening I confirmed it as below. Airport hotel was not paid. The last Payment date was 9th July. And I couldn't find payment history 27th July charge . I'm sure that Airport hotel was not paid. I confirmed your sign in 27th July as below Can I prepare voucher?? I'm looking forward to receiving your response. Best Regards [이름] Can I prepare voucher??

Hello there once again my dear Bella, Like the usual compositions you made, there are no further corrections noted, but I just want you to look after your different punctuation marks because they play vital role in a paragraph..;) Anyway, the way you wrote your composition is impressive, keep up the good work.. Talk to you again later my dear... T.Cam   Dear [Name]. [Name] >>correct! >>Dear [Name]. [Name], (you have to check your punctuation marks)Hello It's a good day. >>correct!Let's start!!Dear [Name]. [Name] >>correct! >>Dear [Name]. [Name], (you have to check your punctuation marks)Good evening >>correct! >>Good evening!- betterI confirmed it as below. >>correct!Airport hotel was not paid. >>correct!The last Payment date was 9th July. >>correct! >>The last payment was just July 9th.And I couldn't find payment history 27th July charge . >>And I couldnt find the bill last July 27th.I'm sure that Airport hotel was not paid. >>Im pretty sure the Airport Hotel was'nt paid.I confirmed your sign in 27th July as below >>correct!Can I prepare voucher?? >>Can I now prepare the voucher?I'm looking forward to receiving your response. >>correct!Best RegardsBella