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Dear [Name].Camelle Hello It is nice talking to you everyday. I will write a letter or create a composition for practice. Dear [Name]. [Name] I changed the posting date and posted it . Thank you for your help And... Did you see my e-mail about fixed asset.?? (Modern system) Can I process expense?? I asked Mr. [Name] from Nam[이름] about fixed asset as blow. He said that this case can be expense. Please refer to the attached file.

Hello Bella my dear..^^

Thank you for your composition! ^^

Here are the corrections Ive noted, I hope they can help...

Read on...

_Camille_

 

Dear [Name].Camelle

>>Dear [Name]. [Name],
Hello
>>Hello.
It is nice talking to you everyday.
>>Correct!
I will write a letter or create a composition for practice.
>>Correct!
Dear [Name]. [Name]
>>Dear [Name]. [Name],
I changed the posting date and posted it .
>>I changed the posting date and posted it again.
Thank you for your help

And...
Did you see my e-mail about fixed asset.?? (Modern system)
>>Thank you for your help and have you read my email about the fixed asset (modern system)?
Can I process expense??
>>Can I now process the expense?
I asked Mr. [Name] from Nam[이름] about fixed asset as blow.
>>I asked Mr. [Name] from Nam[이름] about the fixed asset.
He said that this case can be expense.
>>He said that this case can be expensive.

>>He said that this case can be a part of the expense.
Please refer to the attached file.

>>Correct!