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2011-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name]. [Name] There are too many composition today. As you know I don't have enough time to write composition. Dear [Name]. [Name] morning. I have some question about SAP. I could not post "Woochang" because of reason as blow. I don't know how to do. Would you please give me answer? I am looking forward to your quick reply. Thank you for your help.

강사 첨삭

Hello there my dear Bella..

No worries!

I'm happy to know that you trust my corrections.

_Camille_

 

Dear [Name]. [Name]
>>Dear [Name]. [Name],
Hello.
>>Correct!
There are too many composition today.

>>There are too many compositions today.

>>Ive sent you many compositions today.
As you know I don't have enough time to write composition.
>>As you know I don't have enough time to write compositions.
Dear [Name]. [Name]
>>Dear [Name]. [Name],
Good Morning.
>>Correct!
I have some question about SAP.

>>I have some questions to you about SAP.
I could not post "Woochang" because of reason as blow.
>>I could not post "Woochang" because of the following reasons.
I don't know how to do.
>>I don't know how to do it.
Would you please give me answer?
>>Would you please give me an answer?
I am looking forward to your quick reply.
>>Correct!
Thank you for your help.

>>Correct!

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