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2011-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name]. [Name] morning ! Wow! Thanks God It's Friday!!! I finded fixed assets 5 items and The remained things are all of expense. I marked green color fixed assets 5 items. But I have still some question about Shinhwa and Yuilrack-sys. Shinhwa and Yuilrack-sys only have single PO#. All of Shinhwa and Yuilrack-sys's GR was finished IR. But their tax invoice was still remined. I don't know how to do. Please see file as below. You can find fixed assets 5 items. See you soon. Thank you~^^

강사 첨삭

Thank you for the composition my dear Bella..

Im really delighted to be of help to you..

Talk to you again later..

_Camille_

 

Dear [Name]. [Name]

>>Dear [Name]. [Name],
Good morning !
>>Good morning!
Wow! Thanks God It's Friday!!!
>>Correct!
I finded fixed assets 5 items and The remained things are all of expense.
>>I found five items in the fixed assets  and the remainders are all of the expenses.
I marked green color fixed assets 5 items.
>>I marked a green color for the five items of the fixed assets.

>>I marked the fixed assets green.
But I have still some question about Shinhwa and Yuilrack-sys.
>> But I still have some question about Shinhwa and Yuilrack-sys.
Shinhwa and Yuilrack-sys only have single PO#.
>>Correct!
All of Shinhwa and Yuilrack-sys's GR was finished IR.
>>All of Shinhwa and Yuilrack-sys's GR were finished IR.
But their tax invoice was still remined.
>>But their tax invoice still remined though.
I don't know how to do.
>>I don't know how to do it.

>>I dont know what to do with it.
Please see file as below.
>>Please see the file attached below.
You can find fixed assets 5 items.
>>You can find 5 items on the fixed assets .
See you soon.
>>Correct!
Thank you~^^

>>Correct!

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