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2011-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name]. [Name] Morning I have some questions about office supplies. You requsted me to order 2small A5 Name card holders. But I can't find that items. I can't find product Number too. So Could you please give me answer which number? or Could you please give me answer detail about 2small A5 Name card holders? Thank you for your coperation. ByeBye

강사 첨삭

Thank you my dear Bella for the composition youve sent me..

Ill do my best to help you with it..

talk to you later...

_Camille_

Dear [Name]. [Name]

>>Dear [Name]. [Name],
Good morning.
>>Good morning.
I have some questions about office supplies.
>>I have some questions about the office supplies.
You requsted me to order 2small A5 Name card holders.
>>You requsted me to order two small A5 name card holders.
But I can't find that items.
>>But I couldnt find those items.
I can't find product Number too.
>>I couldnt even find the product number too.
So Could you please give me answer which number? or Could you please give me answer detail about 2small A5 Name card holders?
>>Could you please give me which number or could you please give me detailed answer about two small A5 name card holders?
Thank you for your coperation.
>>Correct!
ByeBye

>>Goodbye.

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