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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name].Camille,
Hello.
It is nice talking to you everyday
It's a nice Wednesday.
Mr. [Name] is gone to Seoul for business trip.
So I have some time to write composition.
Actually, Accountant from Nam[이름] (My coperation account office) is came to Behr korea in the morning.
She will coordinate with SAP system and Nam[이름] system.
So I have to prepare evidence for coordination with SAP system and Nam[이름] system.
And Finance teams will change the tasks and I will add owen tasks.
I'm looking forward to receiving my new tasks.
Have a good day.
See you soon.
ByeBye.
강사 첨삭
Hello there my dear Bella,
I always appreciate you sending some compositions on our website..
Im glad that I can help you as well with this..
Just continue sending more compositions my dear.
Thank you and talk to you again later!^^
T.Camille
Dear [Name].Camille,
>>correct!
Hello.
>>correct!
It is nice talking to you everyday
>>correct! (but try always observe the proper usage of punctuation marks)
It's a nice Wednesday.
>.correct!
Mr. [Name] is gone to Seoul for business trip.
>>Mr. [Name] is gone to Seoul for a business trip.
So I have some time to write composition.
>>So I have some time to write a composition.
Actually, Accountant from Nam[이름] (My coperation account office) is came to Behr korea in the morning.
>>Actually, our accountant from Nam[이름] (Our Corporation Account Office) came to Behr Korea this morning.
She will coordinate with SAP system and Nam[이름] system.
>>correct!
>>She's going to coordinate with SAP and Nam[이름] Systems.
So I have to prepare evidence for coordination with SAP system and Nam[이름] system.
>>So I have to prepare some proofs for coordination with SAP and Nam[이름] Systems.
And Finance teams will change the tasks and I will add owen tasks.
>>And Finance team will change the tasks and I will add some of my own tasks.
I'm looking forward to receiving my new tasks.
>>correct!
Have a good day.
>>correct!
See you soon.
>>correct!
ByeBye.
>> Goodbye!
I always appreciate you sending some compositions on our website..
Im glad that I can help you as well with this..
Just continue sending more compositions my dear.
Thank you and talk to you again later!^^
T.Camille
Dear [Name].Camille,
>>correct!
Hello.
>>correct!
It is nice talking to you everyday
>>correct! (but try always observe the proper usage of punctuation marks)
It's a nice Wednesday.
>.correct!
Mr. [Name] is gone to Seoul for business trip.
>>Mr. [Name] is gone to Seoul for a business trip.
So I have some time to write composition.
>>So I have some time to write a composition.
Actually, Accountant from Nam[이름] (My coperation account office) is came to Behr korea in the morning.
>>Actually, our accountant from Nam[이름] (Our Corporation Account Office) came to Behr Korea this morning.
She will coordinate with SAP system and Nam[이름] system.
>>correct!
>>She's going to coordinate with SAP and Nam[이름] Systems.
So I have to prepare evidence for coordination with SAP system and Nam[이름] system.
>>So I have to prepare some proofs for coordination with SAP and Nam[이름] Systems.
And Finance teams will change the tasks and I will add owen tasks.
>>And Finance team will change the tasks and I will add some of my own tasks.
I'm looking forward to receiving my new tasks.
>>correct!
Have a good day.
>>correct!
See you soon.
>>correct!
ByeBye.
>> Goodbye!
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