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Last night, I searched for the Republic of Gabon on Google.
I could find out some information. I saw many pictures of Gabonese people. But most of them was about the former president "Bongo" who died in 2009.
And I could see an interesting article. The title of this article was "Now that Egypt's Mubarak is out, could Gabon's Bongo be next?"
Wow, it's quiet a horrible title.
Finally I succeeded in find a very useful site. I could get lots of information of Gabon there. Netizens wrote comments of "Thank you! I love this site!" Many of them want to get some information for their homeworks.
The national language is French. I wondered that most Gabonese speak at least two languages. Most Korean speak just Korean language.
I was happy to know more about Gabon and Gabonese people.
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Hi [이름]!
I’m glad that you enjoyed learning more information about Gabon and their people. I hope you will continue to be as inquisitive as you are now. J Have a great day ahead!
Teacher Joanna
Last night, I searched for the Republic of Gabon on Google.
>> Last night, I searched the “Republic of Gabon” on Google.I could find out some information. I saw many pictures of Gabonese people.
>> I found out some information. I saw many pictures of Gabonese people/ Gabon people.
But most of them was about the former president "Bongo" who died in 2009.
>> Most of the information that I found were about the former president named “Bongo” who died in 2009.And I could see an interesting article.
>> Then, I saw an interesting article.
The title of this article was "Now that Egypt's Mubarak is out, could Gabon's Bongo be next?"
>> The title of this article is "Now that Egypt's Mubarak is out, could Gabon's Bongo be next?"Wow, it's quiet a horrible title.
>> Wow. It’s a quite horrible title.Finally I succeeded in find a very useful site.
>> Finally, I succeeded in finding a very useful site.
I could get lots of information of Gabon there.
Netizens wrote comments of "Thank you! I love this site!" Many of them want to get some information for their homeworks.
>> Netizens wrote comments like "Thank you! I love this site!” Many of them want to get some information for their homework.The national language is French. I wondered that most Gabonese speak at least two languages.
>> I find it fascinating that most Gabonese speak at least two languages.
Most Korean speak just Korean language.
>> Most Koreans speak just Korean language.I was happy to know more about Gabon and Gabonese people.
>> I was happy to learn more information about Gabon and Gabonese people.
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