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2011-02-17 · 첨삭 강사 Joanna

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Last night, I searched for the Republic of Gabon on Google. I could find out some information. I saw many pictures of Gabonese people. But most of them was about the former president "Bongo" who died in 2009. And I could see an interesting article. The title of this article was "Now that Egypt's Mubarak is out, could Gabon's Bongo be next?" Wow, it's quiet a horrible title. Finally I succeeded in find a very useful site. I could get lots of information of Gabon there. Netizens wrote comments of "Thank you! I love this site!" Many of them want to get some information for their homeworks. The national language is French. I wondered that most Gabonese speak at least two languages. Most Korean speak just Korean language. I was happy to know more about Gabon and Gabonese people.

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Hi [이름]! I’m glad that you enjoyed learning more information about Gabon and their people. I hope you will continue to be as inquisitive as you are now. J Have a great day ahead! Teacher Joanna   Last night, I searched for the Republic of Gabon on Google. >> Last night, I searched the “Republic of Gabon” on Google.I could find out some information. I saw many pictures of Gabonese people. >> I found out some information. I saw many pictures of Gabonese people/ Gabon people. But most of them was about the former president "Bongo" who died in 2009. >> Most of the information that I found were about the former president named “Bongo” who died in 2009.And I could see an interesting article. >> Then, I saw an interesting article. The title of this article was "Now that Egypt's Mubarak is out, could Gabon's Bongo be next?" >> The title of this article is "Now that Egypt's Mubarak is out, could Gabon's Bongo be next?"Wow, it's quiet a horrible title. >> Wow. It’s a quite horrible title.Finally I succeeded in find a very useful site. >> Finally, I succeeded in finding a very useful site. I could get lots of information of Gabon there.  Netizens wrote comments of "Thank you! I love this site!" Many of them want to get some information for their homeworks. >> Netizens wrote comments like "Thank you! I love this site!” Many of them want to get some information for their homework.The national language is French. I wondered that most Gabonese speak at least two languages. >> I find it fascinating that most Gabonese speak at least two languages. Most Korean speak just Korean language. >> Most Koreans speak just Korean language.I was happy to know more about Gabon and Gabonese people. >> I was happy to learn more information about Gabon and Gabonese people.

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