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And I have another good news today. I got a big scholarship from my school. The tuition fee for the nest semester is very expensive. I got three fourths of it. I could check it on the web this morning. I was just too happy. My mom was also happy about it. I didn't talk about this to my boyfriend yet cause I know that he has a meeting at his company today. So I'm expecting to tell him this good news at night. I usually try not to eat hamberger for my body shape. However, I had a tremendous Shanghai Spicy Burger at McDonald´s. It's my favorite!! I do think I deserve it!! I'm at the school now and I felt like vomitting as studying more and more about administration law. So I started writing this. It's time to study again. Bye, Joanna!

Hi [이름]! I’m so happy for you! That is really a good news! Now you don’t have to think about the expensive tuition fee, you can now focus on your studies! Goodluck with that! Have a great day ahead! -Joanna-   And I have another good news today. >> I have another good news today! I got a big scholarship from my school. (correct) The tuition fee for the nest semester is very expensive. >> The tuition fee for the next semester is very expensive.  I got three fourths of it. >>  I got a big discount which is like three fourths of it. I could check it on the web this morning. I was just too happy. My mom was also happy about it. I didn't talk about this to my boyfriend yet cause I know that he has a meeting at his company today. >> I didn’t tell my boyfriend about this yet because I know that he has a meeting at his company today. So I'm expecting to tell him this good news at night.  I usually try not to eat hamberger for my body shape. >> I usually try not to eat hamburger to maintain my body shape.  However, I had a tremendous Shanghai Spicy Burger at McDonald´s. It's my favorite!! I do think I deserve it!! I'm at the school now and I felt like vomitting as studying more and more about administration law. >>I’m at the school right now and I feel like vomiting. I’m learning more and more about administration law. So I started writing this. >>  or : I started writing this because of that.  It's time to study again. Bye, Joanna! >> Correct