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Dear [Name]. [Name], Good afternoon. I'm [이름][이름] yu from Behrkorea. I have some questions about domino password. My domino ID is " yukyun1" andk my domino password is " 87B6WE". But I couldn't enter by domino password. Is it changed?? If my Domino password is changed please give me new domino password. I'm looking forword to your quick reply Thank you .

Hello there my dear Bella, Thank you so much for the composition.. Here are the following corrections Ive noted, I hope it can help you. Talk to you again on Monday and have a great weekend! T.Cam  Dear [Name]. [Name],>>correct!Good afternoon.>>correct!I'm [이름][이름] yu from Behrkorea.>>correct!I have some questions about domino password.>>correct!My domino ID is " yukyun1" and my domino password is " 87B6WE".>>correct!But I couldn't enter by domino password.>>correct!Is it changed??>>Was it changed?If my Domino password is changed please give me new domino password.>>If my Domino password is changed please give me the new password. I'm looking forword to your quick reply >>I'm looking forward for your immediate response!Thank you .