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학생이 쓴 원문
My friend called me this morning and said that he sent me an e-mail. He asked me to translate it into Korean language. After glancing briefly, I said to him "I'll try to translate it but I'm not sure I can do it correctly." And then, he said "I need a very good translation. You have to trust yourself! I think you can do it!" "Yes, I know I can do it but what I mean is I can't guarantee that it'll be good enough..." Anyway, I struggled to translate it into right expression.
"The temperature for the synthetic chamois towels touching the skin is 2 ℃ than ordinary towels, which is cooler than ordinary towels"
It's hard to understand what it means. But I think it means "While using the chamois towel, we feel cooler than other towels. And the temperature we can feel is 2 ℃"
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!
The composition from your friend is very informative and interesting. Hmm… I became curious how it is. Kkk… How about you? Are you interested about this kind of towel? Don’t you think it is possible? Let’s talk about it in your study time. Take care always!
My friend called me this morning and said that he sent me an e-mail.
>>correct
He asked me to translate it into Korean language.
>> He asked me to translate the mail she sent me into Korean language.
After glancing briefly, I said to him "I'll try to translate it but I'm not sure I can do it correctly."
>>After going over it, I said to him "I'll try to translate it but I'm not sure I can do it correctly."
>> After going over it, I said to him "I'll try to translate it but don’t expect a perfect translation."
And then, he said "I need a very good translation.
>> Correct
You have to trust yourself! I think you can do it!"
>>correct
"Yes, I know I can do it but what I mean is I can't guarantee that it'll be good enough..."
>>correct
Anyway, I struggled to translate it into right expression.
>>correct
"The temperature for the synthetic chamois towels touching the skin is 2 ℃ than ordinary towels, which is cooler than ordinary towels"
>>"The temperature from the synthetic chamois towels touching the skin is 2 ℃ than ordinary towels, which is cooler than ordinary towels"
It's hard to understand what it means.
>>correct
But I think it means "While using the chamois towel, we feel cooler than other towels.
>>correct
And the temperature we can feel is 2 ℃"
>>correct
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