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My grandmother, the youngest maternal aunt and her daughter(my cousin) visited my home today. It's been a really long time since I last met. Because they live in the village where is my mom's hometown, I can't see them often. This night, I lay on the bed with my grandmother and listened her wedding story ^-^ I asked my grandmom "Did you see the grandfather's face before marriage?" She said my grandfather went to her house with his friend to see her father. And other family member let my grandmother know this. So she could watch his back while he was riding a bike to go back home. "Mom, you still remember that moment!" "Yes, of course" Now my grandmother has 8 children and 13 grandchildren. She loves her children and I can feel her deep love. I love my grandmother so much!

Wow! I really like this kind of moment with the elders. Listening to the stories of the past is very interesting. Great imagination and understanding about the ancestors’ life experiences are educational and inspiring. You can write essays about her stories.   My grandmother, the youngest maternal aunt and her daughter(my cousin) visited my home today. >> My grandmother, the youngest maternal grand aunt and her granddaughter (my cousin) us visiting my home today.  It's been a really long time since I last met. Because they live in the village where is my mom's hometown, >> It's been a long time since I last met them because they live in the village. I can't see them often. >>correct This night, I lay on the bed with my grandmother and listened her wedding story ^-^ >> Tonight, I am lying on the bed beside my grandmother and started listening to her wedding story ^-^ I asked my grandmom "Did you see the grandfather's face before marriage?" >> I asked my grand mom, "Did you see grandfather's face before marriage?" >>Have you seen grandfather before the wedding? She said my grandfather went to her house with his friend to see her father. >>correct And other family member let my grandmother know this. >>correct So she could watch his back while he was riding a bike to go back home. >>correct "Mom, you still remember that moment!" >>"Mom, do you still remember that moment!", I asked. "Yes, of course" Now my grandmother has 8 children and 13 grandchildren. >>"Yes, of course," she answered. Now, my grandmother has 8 children and 13 grandchildren. She loves her children and I can feel her deep love. I love my grandmother so much! >>correct