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학생이 쓴 원문
I have one precious younger brother. He's been a good brother to me. Naturally, he was born considerately and sympathetically. Whenever I'm faced with a difficulty, he takes pleasure in helping me. Even today, he woke up early in the morning, went to the library without his breakfast and kept a seat for me at the public library. He sent me a text message, 'Hey, sister. I got a seat for you!'.
I read it from some book that one of the prerequisite for one's happy life is continuing good relationship between siblings. I hope we could share our lives and be happy together.
강사 첨삭
Having a brother is a blessing, [이름]. As a sister, we feel the security and comfort because we know we have our brother who is always beside us. There are times when we don’t agree with them, but when it comes to difficulties and troubles, they are there. Be a blessing to your brother in return.
I have one precious younger brother.
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He's been a good brother to me.
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Naturally, he was born considerately and sympathetically.
>>He was born naturally considerate and sympathetic.
Whenever I'm faced with a difficulty, he takes pleasure in helping me.
>>Whenever I am faced with difficulties, he is always glad to help me.
Even today, he woke up early in the morning, went to the library without his breakfast and kept a seat for me at the public library.
>>To this date, he wakes up early in the morning to go to the library, without taking his breakfast, and reserves a seat for me.
He sent me a text message, 'Hey, sister. I got a seat for you!'.
>>He sends me a text message saying, 'Hey, sister! I got a seat for you!'
I read it from some book that one of the prerequisite for one's happy life is continuing good relationship between siblings.
>> I read from a book that one of the prerequisite for one's happy life is continuing good relationship between siblings.
I hope we could share our lives and be happy together.
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