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Dear [Name]. [Name], Good morning. I asked Mrs. [Name] sohyun detail. She said that we don't have any a rental contract. She said that we will receive tax invoice every month instead a rental contract . Mr. [Name] was approved from Mahle head office. And He can use Mahle office. So We have to pay 600,000KRW for Mr. [Name]. And we will receive tax invoice. But Mr. [Name] didn't finish discussion with Mahle head office. Now, He officialiy working at home for a while. So we don't need to pay KRW 600,000 of Mr.Min's office fee for a while. If you have any question please let me know. Thank you.

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Dear [Name]. [Name],
>>Correct!
Good morning.
>>Correct!
I asked Mrs. [Name] sohyun detail.
>>I asked Mrs. [Name] sohyun about the details.
She said that we don't have any a rental contract.
>>She said that we don't have any rental contracts.
She said that we will receive tax invoice every month instead a rental contract .
>>She said that we will receive tax invoice every month instead of rental contracts.
Mr. [Name] was approved from Mahle head office. And He can use Mahle office.
>>Mr.Kang can use the Mahle office now that has been approved by the Mahle head.
So We have to pay 600,000KRW for Mr. [Name]. And we will receive tax invoice.
>>So we have to pay 600,000KRW for Mr.Kang when he will receive the tax invoice.
But Mr. [Name] didn't finish discussion with Mahle head office. Now, He officialiy working at home for a while.
>>Mr. [Name] did not finish the discussion with the Mahle head office so, he will be working at home for a while.
So we don't need to pay KRW 600,000 of Mr.Min's office fee for a while.
>>So we do not need to pay the fee of 600,000KRW for Mr.Min's office for a while.
If you have any question please let me know.
>>If you have any questions please let me know right away.
Thank you.

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