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2011-02-22 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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Dear [Name]. [Name], Hello. Wow! Thank you for your concern about my new tasks. I received new tasks of contacting with Intercompany. Suddenly, It is important to sending E-mail in English. Here are some example about sending e-mail to Intercompany. Dear [Name].SBTS, Hello. I'm [이름][이름] yu from Finance of Behrkorea. We received invoice about "11BKEP0117" as below. You can find same number and date of invoice. I think double invoices. Would you please give me a some impormation about those invoices? I'm looking forward for your immediate response! Thank you. [이름]

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Thank you for dropping by to send your composition. You did great! I had only few corrections for you. Keep up the good work. Enjoy your day. I'll see you later. -Camille-   Dear [Name]. [Name], >>Correct Hello. >>Correct Wow! >>Correct Thank you for your concern about my new tasks. >>Correct I received new tasks of contacting with Inter-company. >>Correct Suddenly, It is important to sending E-mail in English. >>Suddenly, it is important to send E-mail in English. Here are some example about sending e-mail to Inter-company. >>Here are some examples of e-mails sent to Inter-company. Dear [Name].SBTS, >>Correct Hello. >>Correct I'm [이름][이름] yu from Finance of Behrkorea. >>I'm [이름][이름] Yu from Financing Department of Behrkorea. We received invoice about "11BKEP0117" as below. >>Correct You can find same number and date of invoice. >>You can find the same number and date of invoices. I think double invoices. >>I think there are double invioces. Would you please give me a some impormation about those invoices? >>Would you please give me a some information about those invoices? I'm looking forward for your immediate response. >>Correct Thank you. >>Correct Bye Bye. >>Correct

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