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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name]. [Name],
Hello.
Wow!
Thank you for your concern about my new tasks.
I received new tasks of contacting with Intercompany.
Suddenly, It is important to sending E-mail in English.
Here are some example about sending e-mail to Intercompany.
Dear [Name].SBTS,
Hello.
I'm [이름][이름] yu from Finance of Behrkorea.
We received invoice about "11BKEP0117" as below.
You can find same number and date of invoice.
I think double invoices.
Would you please give me a some impormation about those invoices?
I'm looking forward for your immediate response!
Thank you.
[이름]
강사 첨삭
Hi there,
Thank you for dropping by to send your composition. You did great! I had only few corrections for you. Keep up the good work. Enjoy your day. I'll see you later.
-Camille-
Dear [Name]. [Name],
>>Correct
Hello.
>>Correct
Wow!
>>Correct
Thank you for your concern about my new tasks.
>>Correct
I received new tasks of contacting with Inter-company.
>>Correct
Suddenly, It is important to sending E-mail in English.
>>Suddenly, it is important to send E-mail in English.
Here are some example about sending e-mail to Inter-company.
>>Here are some examples of e-mails sent to Inter-company.
Dear [Name].SBTS,
>>Correct
Hello.
>>Correct
I'm [이름][이름] yu from Finance of Behrkorea.
>>I'm [이름][이름] Yu from Financing Department of Behrkorea.
We received invoice about "11BKEP0117" as below.
>>Correct
You can find same number and date of invoice.
>>You can find the same number and date of invoices.
I think double invoices.
>>I think there are double invioces.
Would you please give me a some impormation about those invoices?
>>Would you please give me a some information about those invoices?
I'm looking forward for your immediate response.
>>Correct
Thank you.
>>Correct
Bye Bye.
>>Correct
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