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2011-02-28 · 첨삭 강사 camille

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear [Name]. [Name], Good afternoon. It's a nice Monday. Actually,Tomorrow is national holiday in Korea. So I'm feel so good. Here is some compositions. Dear [Name].Ziehr, Good afternoon. I already booked invoice of GmbH in SAP. And I already sent to Nam[이름] with Feb. invoice of Intercompany. And I told Ms.Ann about canceled Debit note of SBTS. (Doc.# 85300011/85300012) So... If you have any requests please let me know. Thank you. [이름]

강사 첨삭

Hi there,        Nice composition today. I made very few corrections for you. Keep up the good work! I hope you are going to have a great time this holiday. Enjoy! See you later! -Camille-  Dear [Name]. [Name], >>CorrectGood afternoon. >>CorrectIt's a nice Monday. >>CorrectActually,tomorrow is national holiday in Korea. >>CorrectSo I'm feel so good. >>So, I feel so good.Here is some compositions. >> Here is my composition.Dear [Name].Ziehr, >>CorrectGood afternoon. >>CorrectI already booked invoice of GmbH in SAP.  >>I already booked the invoice for GmbH in SAP. And I already sent to Nam[이름] with Feb. invoice of Intercompany. >> And I already sent it to Nam[이름] with the February invoice of Intercompany.And I told Ms.Ann about canceled Debit note of SBTS. (Doc.# 85300011/85300012) >>And I told Ms.Ann about the cancelled Debit note of SBTS. (Doc.#85300011/85300012)So... If you have any requests please let me know. >>CorrectThank you. >>CorrectByeBye >>Correct

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