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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name]. [Name],
Good afternoon.
It's a nice Monday.
Actually,Tomorrow is national holiday in Korea.
So I'm feel so good.
Here is some compositions.
Dear [Name].Ziehr,
Good afternoon.
I already booked invoice of GmbH in SAP.
And I already sent to Nam[이름] with Feb. invoice of Intercompany.
And I told Ms.Ann about canceled Debit note of SBTS. (Doc.# 85300011/85300012)
So... If you have any requests please let me know.
Thank you.
[이름]
강사 첨삭
Hi there,
Nice composition today. I made very few corrections for you. Keep up the good work! I hope you are going to have a great time this holiday. Enjoy! See you later!
-Camille-
Dear [Name]. [Name],
>>CorrectGood afternoon.
>>CorrectIt's a nice Monday.
>>CorrectActually,tomorrow is national holiday in Korea.
>>CorrectSo I'm feel so good.
>>So, I feel so good.Here is some compositions.
>> Here is my composition.Dear [Name].Ziehr,
>>CorrectGood afternoon.
>>CorrectI already booked invoice of GmbH in SAP.
>>I already booked the invoice for GmbH in SAP. And I already sent to Nam[이름] with Feb. invoice of Intercompany.
>> And I already sent it to Nam[이름] with the February invoice of Intercompany.And I told Ms.Ann about canceled Debit note of SBTS. (Doc.# 85300011/85300012)
>>And I told Ms.Ann about the cancelled Debit note of SBTS. (Doc.#85300011/85300012)So... If you have any requests please let me know.
>>CorrectThank you.
>>CorrectByeBye
>>Correct
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