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Dear [Name].Jang
Good afternoon.
I'm [이름][이름] Yu from Financing Department of Behrkorea.
I confirmed Intercompany balance from Bellin.
As you know Intercompany balance was not matched.
We received open invoices 812,187.85EUR from SBTS.
So it's remain that we didn't received invoices yet.
You can find list which we received invoices.
Would you please give me invoice that we didn't received invoices yet by E-mail??
Thanks for your help in advance.
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Dear [Name].Jang,>>CorrectGood afternoon.>>CorrectI'm [이름][이름] Yu from Financing Department of Behrkorea.>>CorrectI confirmed Intercompany balance from Bellin.>>I confirmed the Intercompany balance from Bellin.As you know Intercompany balance was not matched.>>As you know Intercompany balance didn't match.We received open invoices 812,187.85EUR from SBTS.>>CorrectSo it's remain that we didn't received invoices yet.>> So it means that we didn't receive invoices yet.You can find list which we received invoices.>>You can find the list of invoices we have received.Would you please give me invoice that we didn't received invoices yet by E-mail??>>Would you please give me the copy of the invoice that we didn't receive yet through e-mail ??Thanks for your help in advance.
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