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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there my dear Bella! Glad to hear form you again. How's everything going with you? All good? Nice to be that way.
This is an example of a letter in block style. Remember to use the correct punctuation that goes with such format. Take a look at the corrections and remember to apply them the next time you make a letter in the same format. Enjoy learning.
Dear [Name].Ziehr,
>> Dear [Name]. [Name]:
Good morning
>> Good morning!
>> OR: Greetings!
I already reversed it by MR8M.
>> I have already reversed the ID to MR8M.
But I don't have authority for using MR8M in my ID .
>> I don't have the authority to use the MR8M,
>> OR: I am not authorized to use the MR8M,
So I used Mrs.Min's ID.
>> so I used Mrs. [Name]'s ID.
I don't know why I have not authority for MR8M.
>> I don't know why I am not authorized to use MR8M.
We still having Debit notes 1225.12 EUR for BHTC S.
>> We still have debit notes 1225.12 EUR for BHTCS.
But there are no Debit notes of BHTC 's balance .
>> But, there's no BHTCS balance.
Would you please check it?
>> Would you care to check?
>> OR: Would you kindly check?
I'm looking forward your quick reply.
>> I'm looking forward for your reply.
Thanks.
>> Thank you.
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