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2011-03-03 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name].Ziehr, Good morning I already reversed it by MR8M. But I don't have authority for using MR8M in my ID . So I used Mrs.Min's ID. I don't know why I have not authority for MR8M. We still having Debit notes 1225.12 EUR for BHTC S. But there are no Debit notes of BHTC 's balance . Would you please check it? I'm looking forward your quick reply. Thanks.

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Dear [Name].Ziehr,
>> Dear [Name]. [Name]:
Good morning
>> Good morning!

>> OR: Greetings!
I already reversed it by MR8M.
>> I have already reversed the ID to MR8M.
But I don't have authority for using MR8M in my ID . 
>> I don't have the authority to use the MR8M,

>> OR: I am not authorized to use the MR8M,
So I used Mrs.Min's ID.
>> so I used Mrs. [Name]'s ID.
I don't know why I have not authority for MR8M.
>> I don't know why I am not authorized to use MR8M.
We still having Debit notes 1225.12 EUR for BHTC S.
>> We still have debit notes 1225.12 EUR for BHTCS.
But there are no Debit notes of BHTC 's balance .
>> But, there's no BHTCS balance.
Would you please check it?
>> Would you care to check?

>> OR: Would you kindly check?
I'm looking forward your quick reply.

>> I'm looking forward for your reply.
Thanks.

>> Thank you.

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