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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name].jieting
Thank you so much for your help.
We received information that 20962.80EUR invoice is right as below.
If it was wrong can you please give me a new information??
And would you please give me the copy of the invoice that we didn't receive yet through e-mail???
Thanks for your help in advance.
강사 첨삭
Hello Bella!
Thank you for your composition today! You can construct better sentences now. Keep it up!
T. Camille
Dear [Name].jieting
>> Dear [Name]. [Name],
Thank you so much for your help.
>> Correct
We received information that 20962.80EUR invoice is right as below.
>> We received the information that 20962.80 EUR on the invoice is right as seen below.
If it was wrong can you please give me a new information??
>>If it is wrong can you please give me the new information?
And would you please give me the copy of the invoice that we didn't receive yet through e-mail???
>> Correct
Thanks for your help in advance.
>> Correct
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