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2011-03-03 · 첨삭 강사 camille

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear [Name]. [Name] afternoon! I'm [이름][이름] Yu from Financing Department of Behrkorea. I have some questions about Bellin balance. We up load wrong data in Bellin about GmbH. Originally, 11752.44EUR Invoice was issued from BFH. But I already up load Bellin GmbH. Counterparty was wrong. So we modified Counterparty data to BFH. Finally, BFH balance is Okay. But Even though GmbH detail was collected , GmbH balance is still wrong. Can you give me the solution?

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear Bella,

Thank you so much for sending this composition. It is almost perfect. Great job! Keep it up! I hope it would help. Enjoy your day!

-Camille-

Dear [Name].

>>Correct
Good afternoon!
>>Correct
I'm [이름][이름] Yu from Financing Department of Behrkorea.
>>Correct
I have some questions about Bellin balance.
>>Correct

>>I have some questions about the balance of Bellin.
We up load wrong data in Bellin about GmbH.
>>We uploaded the wrong data in Bellin about GmbH.
Originally, 11752.44EUR Invoice was issued from BFH.
But I already up load Bellin GmbH.
>>Correct
>>But I already uploaded Bellin GmbH.
Counter party was wrong.
>>Correct
So we modified Counter party data to BFH.
>>Correct
Finally, BFH balance is okay.
>>Correct

>>Finally,the BFH balance is okay.
But Even though GmbH detail was collected , GmbH balance is still wrong.
>>But even though GmbH detail was collected , GmbH balance is still wrong.
Can you give me the solution?

>>Correct

>>Can you help me with this?

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