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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Dear my amazing Student [이름],
A terrific Wednesday evening to you! ^^
I had a great sleep last night.
My parents made sure I could sleep very well.
They stayed up for me.
However, I feel bad, because my parents didn\'t sleep well last night. T.T
By the way, here in the Philippines, it is really getting colder day-by-day.
Therefore, the number of mosquitoes is decreasing.
I still see few mosquitoes at home.
My family and I just wear sweaters, jackets and pants to avoid mosquito bites.
It is very dangerous to be bitten by mosquitoes.
They might be carriers of Dengue.
You must really use a mosquito net for you to prevent mosquitoes from biting you and from getting Dengue.
I hope for your health too! ^^
Take care always! ^^,
See you! ^^.
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
Dear my committed Teacher Paula!
>> Dear my committed Teacher Paula, (When you use DEAR for a common letter, use a comma at the end of your greeting.)
Good morning! ^^
>> CORRECT!
Did you have a good sleep last night?
>> CORRECT!
In my case, I didn\'t fall asleep well because of the mosquito.
>> In my case, I didn\'t fall asleep well because of a mosquito. (If it is your first time to introduce an experience, use A not THE.)
Generally, mosquitos disappear at this time of the year, but those are still alive until now.
>> Generally, mosquitoes disappear at this time of the year, but those are still alive until now. (Spelling of mosquitoes.)
I really hate them when they bite me.
>> CORRECT!
Today, I am going to put up a mosquito net again!!!
>> CORRECT!
How about you in the Philippines?
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: How about you there in the Philippines?
Is the mosquito bothering you?
>> Are mosquitoes bothering you? (When you make a general thought, don\'t use THE.)
I am just hoping for keeping your precious blood from them. Hahaha~ ^^
>> CORRECT!
As you already told me, you also wear thick clothes not to get sick because of the weather.
>> CORRECT!
I hope you keep your health.
>> CORRECT!
Bye!
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: See You!
Take care!
>> CORRECT!
See you. ^^
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: See you!
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