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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name]. [Name],
Good afternoon!
I think we can receive all of local tax invoices untill today.
But Tycoampy is not possible.
It has some matters of negotiation about a unit cost.
So Mr. [Name] taegon said that We can receive tax invoices untill Monday.
As you know we have to close Feb. untill today.
So I don't know how to do.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
My dear Bella,
What a job well done on the composition you sent today..
Keep up the good work..:)
Till then.
Enjoy your weekend and take care of yourself.
T.Cam
Dear [Name]. [Name],
>>correct!Good afternoon!
>>correct!I think we can receive all of local tax invoices untill today.>>I think we can receive all local tax invoice today.But Tycoampy is not possible.>>correct!It has some matters of negotiation about a unit cost.>>correct!
>>I still have to do some negotiation about a unit cost.So Mr. [Name] taegon said that We can receive tax invoices untill Monday.>>correct!As you know we have to close Feb. untill today.>>correct!So I don't know how to do.>>correct!
>>So I dont know what to do.Thank you.
>>correct!
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