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2011-03-04 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name]. [Name], Good afternoon! I think we can receive all of local tax invoices untill today. But Tycoampy is not possible. It has some matters of negotiation about a unit cost. So Mr. [Name] taegon said that We can receive tax invoices untill Monday. As you know we have to close Feb. untill today. So I don't know how to do. Thank you.

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My dear Bella, What a job well done on the composition you sent today.. Keep up the good work..:) Till then. Enjoy your weekend and take care of yourself. T.Cam   Dear [Name]. [Name], >>correct!Good afternoon! >>correct!I think we can receive all of local tax invoices untill today.>>I think we can receive all local tax invoice today.But Tycoampy is not possible.>>correct!It has some matters of negotiation about a unit cost.>>correct! >>I still have to do some negotiation about a unit cost.So Mr. [Name] taegon said that We can receive tax invoices untill Monday.>>correct!As you know we have to close Feb. untill today.>>correct!So I don't know how to do.>>correct! >>So I dont know what to do.Thank you. >>correct!

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