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2014-11-05 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear my Teacher Paula! What happened to you? I got a mobile message from POWER ENGLISH yesterday, but there was something wrong with the characters (The characters were broken), and I couldn't understand the meaning of the phone text messages. Then, when I started our class, I realized that you had a personal problem, and you couldn't attend our class. I hope I will see you in our class today. ^^;

강사 첨삭

Dear my clever Student [이름],   I am glad that you shared me your feeling about my absence yesterday. I love you, my student. I ready do. Hahaha! ^^   See you! ^^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula! >> Dear my Teacher Paula, (It should be comma not exclamation mark.)What happened to you? >> CORRECT! I got a mobile message from POWER ENGLISH yesterday, but there was something wrong with the characters (The characters were broken), and I couldn\'t understand the meaning of the phone text messages. >> CORRECT! Then, when I started our class, I realized that you had a personal problem, and you couldn\'t attend our class.>> CORRECT! I hope I will see you in our class today. ^^; >> CORRECT!

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