COMPOSITION
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear my Teacher Paula!
What happened to you?
I got a mobile message from POWER ENGLISH yesterday, but there was something wrong with the characters (The characters were broken), and I couldn't understand the meaning of the phone text messages.
Then, when I started our class, I realized that you had a personal problem, and you couldn't attend our class.
I hope I will see you in our class today. ^^;
강사 첨삭
Dear my clever Student [이름],
I am glad that you shared me your feeling about my absence yesterday.
I love you, my student.
I ready do.
Hahaha! ^^
See you! ^^
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
Dear my Teacher Paula!
>> Dear my Teacher Paula, (It should be comma not exclamation mark.)What happened to you? >> CORRECT!
I got a mobile message from POWER ENGLISH yesterday, but there was something wrong with the characters (The characters were broken), and I couldn\'t understand the meaning of the phone text messages. >> CORRECT!
Then, when I started our class, I realized that you had a personal problem, and you couldn\'t attend our class.>> CORRECT!
I hope I will see you in our class today. ^^;
>> CORRECT!
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