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Dear my reliable Student [이름],

First of all, I want to day SORRY for not checking your composition right away.

I was just really busy preparing for my classes.

I am also glad that you are happy knowing my recovery.

THANK YOU! ^^

I have a question.

What is MUME?

I really don\'t know this word.

I even searched it in my dictionary.

But anyway, it is very normal to miss the people who took care of you.

You can just visit them if you really miss them.

We are both lucky and happy.

Don\'t worry! ^^

I will take care of myself very well.

You must also.

Okay? ^^

By the way, a blissful Thursday for you! ^^

Today, I am giving you 8 our of 10.

I consider your work as very good.

You really have lesser mistakes now.

Anyway, see you! ^^

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my strong Teacher Paula,

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I am glad that your sickness is not that serious.
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In Korea, when people have a stomachache, they usually drink a lukewarm mume fruit tea.
>> CORRECT! (However, I don\'t know the meaning of MUME. What is it?)

When I was a child, I also used to have a stomachache very often.
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Whenever I suffered from indigestion, my grandmother took care of me, and she pricked my thumb with a needle.
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Owing to her careful nursing, I could recover easily from my sickness.
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Suddenly, I missed her very much.
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You are very lucky and happy because many people are caring for you.
>> You are very lucky and happy, because many people are caring for you. (There should be a COMMA before BECAUSE since two complete thought were combined.)

>> OR: You are very lucky and happy, because many people are taking care of you.

Anyway, do your body a favor.
>> CORRECT!

See you! ^^

>> CORRECT!