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Dear my dependable Teacher Paula, Happy Friday! I am very glad that you give me a reply for my composition every day. Owing to your thoughtful reply, I am always expecting to check my composition the next day. I found that you really don't know what MUME is . Actually, I also really want to explain what MUME is, but I didn't search a suitable word in my dictionary. The pronunciation of MUME in Korean is MAE SIL, and it is also called Asian Apricot. I would like to let you see the picture of that when I get a chance. By the way, I saw the Halloween costumes and lanterns, but I couldn't tell which one you are. Did you also participate in the contest? I am sorry to give you this kind of question. ㅠㅜ Anyway, I want you to make a great weekend with your families and friends. See you! ^^ [이름]

Dear my enthusiastic Student [이름],   T.G.I.F. (Thank God It\'s Friday!) It is indeed a happy Friday. I am sharing this wonderful day to you. ^^   By the way, THANK YOU for telling me about what you feel towards me as your teacher, especially in relation with your writings. I would like to say THANK YOU again for explaining the meaning of MUME to me. However, I think it is UME not MUME, but it is not really a big deal. Don\'t worry about the picture of an Asian Apricot. I already searched it on the web. When I saw the picture, I instantly salivated. Hahaha! ^^   Ohhh! ^^ About my Halloween costume and lantern, frankly speaking, I didn\'t submit any Halloween lanterns. I am really bad. Fortunately, as what you have seen last Friday, I participated in Halloween costume competition. I am number 20 on the given sites. Don\'t say SORRY for asking me a question. It is awesomely fine with me.   Anyway, I hope you are satisfied with my reply. Before I forget, your score today is 8 out of 10. You surely did a great composition, but you still need to have improvements.   That\'s all for now! ^^ See you very soon! ^^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     ***RECOMMENDED LETTER FORMAT***   Dear my dependable Teacher Paula,   Happy Friday!   I am very glad that you give me a reply for my composition every day. Owing to your thoughtful reply, I am always expecting to check my composition the next day. I found that you really don\'t know what MUME is .Actually, I also really want to explain what MUME is, but I didn\'t search a suitable word in my dictionary. The pronunciation of MUME in Korean is MAE SIL, and it is also called Asian Apricot. I would like to let you see the picture of that when I get a chance. By the way, I saw the Halloween costumes and lanterns, but I couldn\'t tell which one you are. Did you also participate in the contest? I am sorry to give you this kind of question. ㅠㅜ   Anyway, I want you to make a great weekend with your families and friends. See you! ^^   [이름]     ***CORRECTIONS AND SUGGESTIONS***   Dear my dependable Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Happy Friday! >> CORRECT! I am very glad that you give me a reply for my composition every day. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I am very glad that you reply to my compositions every day. Owing to your thoughtful reply, I am always expecting to check my composition the next day. >> CORRECT! I found that you really don\'t know what MUME is .>> I found that you really don\'t know what MUME is. (There mustn\'t be any spaces between IS and the PERIOD [.]) Actually, I also really want to explain what MUME is, but I didn\'t search a suitable word in my dictionary. >> CORRECT! The pronunciation of MUME in Korean is MAE SIL, and it is also called Asian Apricot. >> CORRECT! (However, I think it is UME not MUME.) I would like to let you see the picture of that when I get a chance. >> CORRECT! By the way, I saw the Halloween costumes and lanterns, but I couldn\'t tell which one you are. >> By the way, I saw the Halloween costumes and lanterns, but I couldn\'t tell which one is yours. (I\'m not a costume or a lantern, so WHICH ONE YOU ARE is incorrect.) Did you also participate in the contest? >> CORRECT! I am sorry to give you this kind of question. ㅠㅜ >> CORRECT! Anyway, I want you to make a great weekend with your families and friends. >> Anyway, I want you to make a great weekend with your family and friends. (FAMILIES should be FAMILY, since I only have one family.) See you! ^^ >> CORRECT! [이름] >> CORRECT!