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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear my sincere Teacher Paula,
Good morning.
It is the start of a new week now, and I hope you can escape from the Monday syndrome.
I am also trying not to suffer from the Monday syndrome now, and I am looking for something that can make me happy.
My weekend time was not too special, and I could say that it was a little boring.
I got up later than usual, and I had some brunch at home.
Then, after finishing my laundry, I went to the coffee shop to see my boyfriend.
Both of us spent our own time for a long time there.
I think this kind of date will last for a while because of his examination.
I hope he will pass his examination. ^^
By the way, I found your costume on the given sites. (Power English bulletin board)
You were standing with black clothes in a group photograph.
To be honest, you are the most bountiful lady among them.
(I am serious. ^^ )
Anyway, sweetheart, Cheer up!
See you!
[이름]
강사 첨삭
Dear my unbeatable Student [이름]! ^.^
Good evening! ^^
Hahaha! ^^
I think my rerply is really late.
I apologize for it.
You are right that it is the start of a new week.
That\'s why we should start this week right.
Make laziness disapear.
Well, you had a good time with your boyfriend even though he is busy.
I am sure you understand him totally.
I also know that you totally support him.
That\'s all for now! ^^
See you! ^^
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
Dear my sincere Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT!
Good morning. >> CORRECT!
>> OR: Good morning!
It is the start of a new week now, and I hope you can escape from the Monday syndrome. >> CORRECT!
>> OR: It is the start of a new week now, and I hope you can escape from the Mondau sickness.
I am also trying not to suffer from the Monday syndrome now, and I am looking for something that can make me happy. >> I am also trying not to suffer from it now, and I am looking for something that can make me happy.
My weekend time was not too special, and I could say that it was a little boring. >> CORRECT!
>> OR: My time last weekend was not too special, and I could say that it was a little boring.
I got up later than usual, and I had some brunch at home. >> CORRECT!
Then, after finishing my laundry, I went to the coffee shop to see my boyfriend. >> CORRECT!
Both of us spent our own time for a long time there. >> CORRECT!
I think this kind of date will last for a while because of his examination. >> CORRECT!
I hope he will pass his examination. ^^>> CORRECT!
By the way, I found your costume on the given sites. (Power English bulletin board)>> CORRECT!
You were standing with black clothes in a group photograph. >> CORRECT!
To be honest, you are the most bountiful lady among them. >> CORRECT!
(I am serious. ^^ )>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I am serious. (You may remove the parentheses.)
Anyway, sweetheart, Cheer up! >> Anyway, Sweetheart, cheer up!
See you! >> CORRECT!
[이름]
>> CORRECT!
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