composition

2014-11-10 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear my sincere Teacher Paula, Good morning. It is the start of a new week now, and I hope you can escape from the Monday syndrome. I am also trying not to suffer from the Monday syndrome now, and I am looking for something that can make me happy. My weekend time was not too special, and I could say that it was a little boring. I got up later than usual, and I had some brunch at home. Then, after finishing my laundry, I went to the coffee shop to see my boyfriend. Both of us spent our own time for a long time there. I think this kind of date will last for a while because of his examination. I hope he will pass his examination. ^^ By the way, I found your costume on the given sites. (Power English bulletin board) You were standing with black clothes in a group photograph. To be honest, you are the most bountiful lady among them. (I am serious. ^^ ) Anyway, sweetheart, Cheer up! See you! [이름]

강사 첨삭

Dear my unbeatable Student [이름]! ^.^   Good evening! ^^ Hahaha! ^^ I think my rerply is really late. I apologize for it.   You are right that it is the start of a new week. That\'s why we should start this week right. Make laziness disapear.   Well, you had a good time with your boyfriend even though he is busy. I am sure you understand him totally. I also know that you totally support him.   That\'s all for now! ^^ See you! ^^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my sincere Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Good morning. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Good morning! It is the start of a new week now, and I hope you can escape from the Monday syndrome. >> CORRECT! >> OR: It is the start of a new week now, and I hope you can escape from the Mondau sickness. I am also trying not to suffer from the Monday syndrome now, and I am looking for something that can make me happy. >> I am also trying not to suffer from it now, and I am looking for something that can make me happy. My weekend time was not too special, and I could say that it was a little boring. >> CORRECT! >> OR: My time last weekend was not too special, and I could say that it was a little boring. I got up later than usual, and I had some brunch at home. >> CORRECT! Then, after finishing my laundry, I went to the coffee shop to see my boyfriend. >> CORRECT! Both of us spent our own time for a long time there. >> CORRECT! I think this kind of date will last for a while because of his examination. >> CORRECT! I hope he will pass his examination. ^^>> CORRECT! By the way, I found your costume on the given sites. (Power English bulletin board)>> CORRECT! You were standing with black clothes in a group photograph. >> CORRECT! To be honest, you are the most bountiful lady among them. >> CORRECT! (I am serious. ^^ )>> CORRECT! >> OR: I am serious. (You may remove the parentheses.) Anyway, sweetheart, Cheer up! >> Anyway, Sweetheart, cheer up! See you! >> CORRECT! [이름] >> CORRECT!

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·