composition

Dear my undefying Student [이름],

OMG ~~~ ^^

I don\'t know what to say.

I am so overwhelmed because of what you written in your composition.

I am happy that I somehow satisfy you.

You are right! ^^

You should keep on having this course.

You will not lose anything if you continue it.

You can just gain something from it.

You will surely have better English skills.

By the way, If your are happy that you meet me, I think the pleasure is mine! ^^

That\'s all for now! ^^

Don\'t forget to see your composition\'s corrections and suggestions.

See you tomorrow! ^^,

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my positive Teacher Paula,
>> CORRECT!

Good evening.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: Good evening!

Today, I was very busy at my work, and I didn\'t hand in my writing in the morning.
>> CORRECT!

Now, after our class, I just saw your notes for last my writing, and I thought that you gave me a good advice.
>> Now, after our class, I just saw your notes for my last writing, and I thought that you gave me a good advice. (LAST MY WRITING is wrong. It should be MY LAST WRITING. Possessive Pronoun + Adjective + Noun)

According to your notes, I should not tell myself negative things.
>> CORRECT!

Even if speaking English is a very difficult course, I will keep going until I can be a talkative in English.
>> Even if speaking English is a very difficult course, I will keep going until I can be talkative in English. (Since TALKATIVE is an adjective, you shouldn\'t put an article in front of it.)

>> OR: Even if speaking English is a very difficult course, I will keep going until I can be a talkative speaker in English.

>> OR: Even if speaking English is a very difficult course, I will keep going until I can be a talkative English speaker.

I am really happy to meet you who are such a positive and committed teacher. ^^
>> I am really happy to meet you who is such a positive and committed teacher. (ARE should be IS because of the word teacher.)

>> OR: I am really happy to meet a person like you who is such a positive and committed teacher.

Take care!
>> CORRECT!

See you tomorrow. ^^
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: See you tomorrow!

[이름]

>> CORRECT!