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Dear my lively Teacher Paula, Good afternoon. I am writing this after my lunch, and I am happy to communicate with you by this writing. One day, I started not to make a composition about the subject in feedback. It is because the subject in feedback is a little propound, so to make a composition in English, I need more time in my current English level. To be honest, It's not easy to do work and study English at the same time. Sometimes, I don't even have a time to check your notes. However, I really know that making composition will be very helpful for me, so I can't be lazy. Of course, your note is just the motive of avoiding my laziness. Today, I am still busy to work, and I have to keep on doing my work right now. Let's talk this evening. ^^ Have a good day. See you! [이름]

Dear my cheerful Student [이름],   A flaming Friday evening to you! ^^ I am very pleased that you write and share what you feel every day. You also share your concerns. Through your compositions, I feel more closer to you. Somehow, I know and understand you better. Frankly speaking, I like the way you do your homework or compositions.   I know what you feel in relation to working and studying. Doing one of them alone is already dreadful. What more if they are done at the same time? It is the same with making compositions.  Making compositions is not a joke. It is a serious thing, because it will determine if you are improving or not. On how I see it, you have a good writing skill. You just need to polish it by searching some methods on how to make it better.   I know that laziness is the greatest enemy of a student. Only the student can defeat it. It is really good that you have the courage to eliminate that feeling. I am proud of you! ^^   You are a very diligent woman. However, don\'t forget to take are of yourself. I know that your boyfriend is just there, but he is also busy. Be sure to nurse yourself.   Yes, let\'s talk later this evening! ^^ Let\'s make the best out of it! ^.^ Hahaha! ^^   See you very soon! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my lively Teacher Paula,>> CORRECT! Good afternoon. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Good afternoon! I am writing this after my lunch, and I am happy to communicate with you by this writing. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I am writing this letter after my lunch, and I am happy to communicate with you through this writing. One day, I started not to make a composition about the subject in feedback. >> CORRECT! It is because the subject in feedback is a little propound, so to make a composition in English, I need more time in my current English level. >> It is because the subject in feedback propounds a little, so to make a composition in English, I need more time in my current English level. (PROPOUND can\'t be used as an adjective because it is only used as a verb.) To be honest, It\'s not easy to do work and study English at the same time. >> CORRECT! >> OR: To be honest, it\'s not easy to do work and study English at the same time. (\"It\'s\" should be \"it\'s\", because it is located after a comma.) OR: To be honest, it\'s not easy to work and study English at the same time. Sometimes, I don\'t even have a time to check your notes. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Sometimes, I don\'t even have some time to check your notes. >> OR: Sometimes, I don\'t even enough time to check your notes. However, I really know that making composition will be very helpful for me, so I can\'t be lazy. >> However, I really know that making compositions will be very helpful for me, so I can\'t be lazy. (COMPOSITION should be with S since you should so more than one composition to improve your writing skill.) >> OR: However, I really know that making compositions will be very helpful for me, so I shouldn\'t be lazy. Of course, your note is just the motive of avoiding my laziness. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Of course, your notes are just my motives of avoiding my laziness. Today, I am still busy to work, and I have to keep on doing my work right now. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Today, I am still busy at work, and I have to keep on doing my duties right now. Let\'s talk this evening. ^^>> CORRECT! Have a good day. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Have a good day! >> OR: Have a good day ahead! See you!>> CORRECT! [이름] >> CORRECT!