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Dear my powerful Teacher Paula, Good afternoon! How did you like your last weekend? In my case, I had a sore throat, so I feel a little ill until now. Because of this, I took a rest at home last weekend. I was supposed to visit my friend's home, but I didn't put my plan into the action. I was worried that I would give my cold to my friend and her two babies. Last weekend, I turned my electric pad on, and I was lying down to warm my body. To avoid getting worse, I had lukewarm water frequently. Now, I feel better than yesterday, and my cough has been alleviated. There is also a big temperature difference between day and night in the Philippines. That kind of weather is very easy to have a cold, so be careful not to catch a cold. ^^ See you later. [이름]

Dear my extraordinary Student [이름],   A wonderful starry evening to you! ^^   Thank you for sharing some information about your weekend to me! ^^ It\'s really a pleasure.   To start, let me answer your question. I enjoyed a great time last weekend. Of course, I had a wonderful time with my family. I just stayed at home, did some household chores and had some great talks with my family, especially with my mother.   By the way, I really feel bad that you somehow ended up staying at your place. I know you really wanted to see your friend and her kids, but because of your condition last weekend, you really needed to cancel your plan. Well, there\'s still next time. There are a lot of next times. No one knows, you might have a fantastic time with your friend and her kids the next time you visit them I know that you are a strong and optimistic woman. What happened last weekend won\'t make you feel very bad. You are lucky, because you are recovering.   Anyway, you are right that here in the Philippines, there is a drastic change in temperature between day and night. Therefore, I always bring a coat every day. Thank you for reminding me to take care of myself! ^^ You must take care more of yourself. Take some multivitamins. They will help you have better immune system.   That\'s all for now! ^^ See you! ^^,   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my powerful Teacher Paula,>> CORRECT! Good afternoon! >> CORRECT! How did you like your last weekend? >> CORRECT! >> OR: How did you like your weekend? In my case, I had a sore throat, so I feel a little ill until now.>> CORRECT! Because of this, I took a rest at home last weekend. >> CORRECT! I was supposed to visit my friend\'s home, but I didn\'t put my plan into the action.>> I was supposed to visit my friend\'s home, but I didn\'t put my plan into action. (PUT SOMETHING INTO ACTION is a fixed idiom. There should be no THE before ACTION.) I was worried that I would give my cold to my friend and her two babies. >> CORRECT! Last weekend, I turned my electric pad on, and I was lying down to warm my body. >> Last weekend, I turned my electric pad on and lay down to warm my body. (Since you used LAST WEEKEND, you should only use simple past verbs.) >> OR: Last weekend, I turned my electric pad on, and I lay down to warm my body. To avoid getting worse, I had lukewarm water frequently. >> CORRECT! >> OR: For my condition not to get worse, ... >> OR: To avoid my condition to get worse, ... Now, I feel better than yesterday, and my cough has been alleviated.>> CORRECT! There is also a big temperature difference between day and night in the Philippines.>> CORRECT! That kind of weather is very easy to have a cold, so be careful not to catch a cold. ^^>> CORRECT! See you later. >> CORRECT! >> OR: See you later! [이름] >> CORRECT!