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Dear my witty Student [이름],

Good evening! ^^

First, I would like to say sorry for replying to your composition not before our class.

By the way, don\'t worry about what happened yesterday.

I know that you won\'t make any holds if it\'s not needed.

I clearly understand you.

I am really clad now that you are recovering.

I hope you will recover completely from your cold very soon.

Anyway, thank you for reminding me to take care of myself more.

I really appreciate it.

Thank you very much! ^^

However, I really think you need more care than me.

You must take care of yourself more.

That\'s all for now! ^^

See you tomorrow! ^^.

Rest well! ^^,

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my brilliant Teacher Paula,
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Good morning.
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>> OR: Good morning!

Firstly, I am sorry that I could not take a lesson yesterday.
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>> OR: Firstly, I am sorry that I couldn\'t have class with you yesterday.

I was not a good condition yesterday because of my cold.
>> I was not in a good condition yesterday because of my cold. (There should be IN to make the meaning of the sentence correct.)

Yesterday, I thought I felt better than the day before yesterday, but my condition was the worst yesterday.
>> Yesterday, I thought I would feel better than the day before yesterday, but my condition was the worst. (Try not to use YESTERDAY too much.)

Therefore, I took a half day off yesterday to take a more rest.
>> Therefore, I took a half day off yesterday to take more rest. (When you put MORE before REST, there\'s no need to put an article before MORE.)

>> OR: Therefore, I took a half day off yesterday to take some more rest.

>> OR: Therefore, I took a half day off yesterday to take some rest more.

Now, my voice is hoarse because of a cold.
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>> OR: Now, my voice is hoarse because of my cold.

You will also feel that my voice is a little strange. ^^;;
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I am now working at my office and drinking hot ginger tea constantly.
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Drinking much tea and water make me go to the restroom often.
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I think, this is a nasty cold, so you should also take care more of yourself even if we are not in the same country. ^^
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See you later.
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>> OR: See you later!

[이름]

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