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2014-11-20 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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Dear my active Teacher Paula, Good morning. My voice is still hoarse, so it might bother today's class. I hope you will understand my situation. ^^ By the way, I searched about TINOLA and ADOBO that you told me last class. I already understood Tinola through your kind explanation. For the Adobo, I saw the picture on the internet, and I think, there are many kind of Adobo by choosing main ingredient. If you ask me what kind of Adobo I prefer, I will choose Pork Adobo. It seems like a Koran food 'Gal Bi stew', and I am sure that the taste will be the same with ours. I am very glad to know about Philippine culture from you. I hope I can learn more about your culture during our classes. See you soon. PS: I have a question. ^^;; I am a little confused about title of the Philippines, and I searched some words as follow. *Philippine: no's' *Philippines: with's' *The Philippines: with'the'and's' Would you like to explain what the difference between them is?

강사 첨삭

Dear my convivial Student Paula,   First of all, let me greet you by saying HAPPY THURSDAY! ^^ Thank you for making your composition! ^^, It helped me learn more about English.   By the way, before I answer your question, I would like to say SORRY for not giving you the information regarding your mistakes. I want you to test yourself. I want you to understand why some of your sentences are wrong. If you still have questions, please be free to ask questions even during our class.   Well! ~~~ ^^ Let\'s start to talk about your question. I think there are only two ways of using the word Philippines. First, it is the Philippines without \'s\'. Philippine is an adjective, so it can be used before a noun like Philippine culture. Second, it is the Philippines. This is with \'the\' and \'s\'. This is used as a noun to identify the country of the Filipinos. Therefore, we can have the sentence as follows. I want to go to the Philippines.   That\'s all for now! ^^ I hope I satisfied your hunger of learning about the Philippines. See you tomorrow! ^^,   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my active Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Good morning.>> CORRECT! >> OR: Good morning! My voice is still hoarse, so it might bother today\'s class. >> CORRECT! >> OR: My voice is still hoarse, so it might interrupt today\'s class. I hope you will understand my situation. ^^>> CORRECT! By the way, I searched about TINOLA and ADOBO that you told me last class. >> By the way, I searched about TINOLA and ADOBO that you told me in our last class. I already understood Tinola through your kind explanation.>> CORRECT! For the Adobo, I saw the picture on the internet, and I think, there are many kind of Adobo by choosing main ingredient. >> For the Adobo, I saw the picture on the internet, and I think there are many kinds of Adobo by choosing a main ingredient. >> OR: For the Adobo, I saw the picture on the internet, and I think there are many kinds of Adobo depending on the main ingredient that will be used. If you ask me what kind of Adobo I prefer, I will choose Pork Adobo. >> CORRECT! It seems like a Koran food \'Gal Bi stew\', and I am sure that the taste will be the same with ours. >> It seems like a Korean food \'Gal Bi Stew\', and I am sure that the taste will be the same with ours. I am very glad to know about Philippine culture from you. >> CORRECT! I hope I can learn more about your culture during our classes. >> CORRECT! See you soon. >> CORRECT! >> OR: See you soon! PS: I have a question. ^^;;>> CORRECT! I am a little confused about title of the Philippines, and I searched some words as follow. >> I am a little confused about the title of the Philippines, and I searched some words as follow. *Philippine: no\'s\' >> *Philippines: no \'s\' *Philippines: with\'s\' >> *Philippines: with \'s\' *The Philippines: with\'the\'and\'s\' >> The Philippines: with \'the\' and \'s\' Would you like to explain what the difference between them is? >> CORRECT!

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