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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear my active Teacher Paula,
Good morning.
My voice is still hoarse, so it might bother today's class.
I hope you will understand my situation. ^^
By the way, I searched about TINOLA and ADOBO that you told me last class.
I already understood Tinola through your kind explanation.
For the Adobo, I saw the picture on the internet, and I think, there are many kind of Adobo by choosing main ingredient.
If you ask me what kind of Adobo I prefer, I will choose Pork Adobo.
It seems like a Koran food 'Gal Bi stew', and I am sure that the taste will be the same with ours.
I am very glad to know about Philippine culture from you.
I hope I can learn more about your culture during our classes.
See you soon.
PS: I have a question. ^^;;
I am a little confused about title of the Philippines, and I searched some words as follow.
*Philippine: no's'
*Philippines: with's'
*The Philippines: with'the'and's'
Would you like to explain what the difference between them is?
강사 첨삭
Dear my convivial Student Paula,
First of all, let me greet you by saying HAPPY THURSDAY! ^^
Thank you for making your composition! ^^,
It helped me learn more about English.
By the way, before I answer your question, I would like to say SORRY for not giving you the information regarding your mistakes.
I want you to test yourself.
I want you to understand why some of your sentences are wrong.
If you still have questions, please be free to ask questions even during our class.
Well! ~~~ ^^
Let\'s start to talk about your question.
I think there are only two ways of using the word Philippines.
First, it is the Philippines without \'s\'.
Philippine is an adjective, so it can be used before a noun like Philippine culture.
Second, it is the Philippines.
This is with \'the\' and \'s\'.
This is used as a noun to identify the country of the Filipinos.
Therefore, we can have the sentence as follows.
I want to go to the Philippines.
That\'s all for now! ^^
I hope I satisfied your hunger of learning about the Philippines.
See you tomorrow! ^^,
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
Dear my active Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT!
Good morning.>> CORRECT!
>> OR: Good morning!
My voice is still hoarse, so it might bother today\'s class. >> CORRECT!
>> OR: My voice is still hoarse, so it might interrupt today\'s class.
I hope you will understand my situation. ^^>> CORRECT!
By the way, I searched about TINOLA and ADOBO that you told me last class. >> By the way, I searched about TINOLA and ADOBO that you told me in our last class.
I already understood Tinola through your kind explanation.>> CORRECT!
For the Adobo, I saw the picture on the internet, and I think, there are many kind of Adobo by choosing main ingredient. >> For the Adobo, I saw the picture on the internet, and I think there are many kinds of Adobo by choosing a main ingredient.
>> OR: For the Adobo, I saw the picture on the internet, and I think there are many kinds of Adobo depending on the main ingredient that will be used.
If you ask me what kind of Adobo I prefer, I will choose Pork Adobo. >> CORRECT!
It seems like a Koran food \'Gal Bi stew\', and I am sure that the taste will be the same with ours. >> It seems like a Korean food \'Gal Bi Stew\', and I am sure that the taste will be the same with ours.
I am very glad to know about Philippine culture from you. >> CORRECT!
I hope I can learn more about your culture during our classes. >> CORRECT!
See you soon. >> CORRECT!
>> OR: See you soon!
PS: I have a question. ^^;;>> CORRECT!
I am a little confused about title of the Philippines, and I searched some words as follow. >> I am a little confused about the title of the Philippines, and I searched some words as follow.
*Philippine: no\'s\'
>> *Philippines: no \'s\'
*Philippines: with\'s\'
>> *Philippines: with \'s\'
*The Philippines: with\'the\'and\'s\'
>> The Philippines: with \'the\' and \'s\'
Would you like to explain what the difference between them is?
>> CORRECT!
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