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Dear my gregarious Student [이름],

Wow ~~~ ^^

Thank you for explaining more about what we talked about last Friday! ^^

Now, I totally understand.

By the way, I am giving you 9 out of 10 for doing your composition.

It is almost perfect.

However, don\'t forget to check some corrections and suggestions for your writing improvement.

See you! ^^

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my precious Teacher Paula,
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Good day!
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I listened to the recording of our class in this morning, and there is something to make it clear in our conversation.
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>> OR: I listened to the recording of our class this morning, and there is something we need to be clear in our conversation.

>> OR: I listened to the recording of our class this morning, and there is something in our conversation that needs clarification.

I also have a responsibility to explain clearly our culture to you.
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>> OR: I also have a responsibility to explain our culture to you clearly.

A leap month is what I wanted to tell you in our last class.
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Here in Korea, old people use the lunar calendar, and we celebrate New Year\'s Day and Thanksgiving Day by lunar counting.
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To complement the day differences between the lunar and the solar calendar, our ancestors add a leap month in calendar from old times.
>> To complement the day differences between the lunar and the solar calendars, our ancestors add a leap month in the calendar from old times. (Since you are talking two calendars, the word CALENDAR in the first part of the sentence should be with S. Don\'t forget also to put THE when you use CALENDAR.)

A leap year comes around every 4 years, and the period in this year is on Oct 24th ~ Nov 21st.
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Many people don\'t get married in this term because of a superstition.
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It is traditionally said that people think like that they can\'t receive a care from their ancestors if they get married during this term.
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It is still not enough to explain about a leap year by my current English level, but I hope it can make you understand more than I did in our last class.

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See you.
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>> OR: See you!

[이름]

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