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Dear my outgoing Teacher Paula, Good day! I was glad to see your spirited figure in yesterday's our class. I really like that. ^^ Suddenly, I saw the rating on the feedback page, and I found that my listening level was up. Just seeing about this result makes me so excited. ^^ I have been studying English with you for 2months, and I am doing my best every day. I can't feel the remarkable result for now, but I can feel that my fear for speaking English is disappearing gradually. I owe it all to you. I will appreciate your help and encouragement. See you later. *ESSAY: Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Yes, I think so. I am also doing homework every day, and my Teacher Paula helps me correct my mistakes. I know that my teacher will be a little hard to check my composition every day because she is very busy. I heartily appreciate her being a good teacher. Thank you, Paula!

Dear my intellectual Student [이름],   I don\'t know what to say. You appreciate me a lot. That is really overwhelming. I hope my head will not blow up. Hahaha ~~~ ^^   By the way, I think it is a normal thing for teachers to give homework to their students. Those activities serve as practices for students to master the different subjects they are taking.   About your composition, you did great, but I think you can say more or write more. You just told more about me. Hahaha ~~~ ^^ I like it, but I also encourage you to widen your thinking about the given essay question.   Anyway, I really like your composition! ^^ However, check the corrections and suggestions I included with your writing.   That\'s all for now! ^^ See you! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my outgoing Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Good day!>> CORRECT! I was glad to see your spirited figure in yesterday\'s our class. >> I was glad to see your spirited figure in our yesterday\'s class. (Possessive pronouns are always located before nouns.) I really like that. ^^ >> CORRECT! Suddenly, I saw the rating on the feedback page, and I found that my listening level was up.>> CORRECT! Just seeing about this result makes me so excited. ^^>> CORRECT! I have been studying English with you for 2months, and I am doing my best every day. >> CORRECT! I can\'t feel the remarkable result for now, but I can feel that my fear for speaking English is disappearing gradually. >> CORRECT! I owe it all to you. >> CORRECT! I will appreciate your help and encouragement. >> CORRECT! See you later. >> CORRECT! >> OR: See you later! *ESSAY: Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Yes, I think so. >> CORRECT! I am also doing homework every day, and my Teacher Paula helps me correct my mistakes. >> CORRECT! I know that my teacher will be a little hard to check my composition every day because she is very busy. >> I know that my teacher will be a little hard to check my composition every day, because she is very busy. (There should be a comma before a conjunction that connects two complete sentences.) >> OR: I know that my teacher will feel a little hard to check my composition every day, because she is very busy. I heartily appreciate her being a good teacher. >> CORRECT! Thank you, Paula! >> CORRECT!