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Dear my lovable Teacher Paula, Good morning. How do you feel? I believe that you already got over your sore throat and high fever. Today is the first day in Dec, and only a month is left before the end of this year. I hope you can spend a significant time for the rest of this year. ^^ See you. *Essay I agree with this opinion. I am also taking an English course with my Teacher Paula, and every day, I check how good my performance in last class was. The marks are a very important thing for me to check my level. More important thing than this is a teacher's comment. Every day, I read the comment carefully, and I try to change my bad habit in speaking English. I have a limit on studying English by SKYPE because we can't meet man-to-man. In this case, I only can't help to depend on teacher's advice. I think teacher's grades must be objective and realistic so that students can know whether their level reached their goal or not.

Dear my understanding Student [이름],   A cold Monday night to the both us! ^.^   I like your composition. It reminds me about my obligations as a teacher. THANK YOU VERY MUCH! ^^   However, there are some points in your composition that need attention. Please see the corrections and suggestion below for your improvement.   Anyway, you did a great job with your writing! ^^ See you! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my lovable Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT!Good morning. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Good morning! How do you feel? >> CORRECT! I believe that you already got over your sore throat and high fever.>> CORRECT! Today is the first day in Dec, and only a month is left before the end of this year. >> Today is the first day of December, and only a month is left before the end of this year. (PATTERN: the first day of teh month) I hope you can spend a significant time for the rest of this year. ^^>> CORRECT! See you. >> CORRECT! >> OR: See you!   *Essay I agree with this opinion. >> CORRECT! I am also taking an English course with my Teacher Paula, and every day, I check how good my performance in last class was. >> CORRECT! The marks are a very important thing for me to check my level. >> The marks are very important things for me to check my level. (You used ARE, so the following nouns should be in plural form. More important thing than this is a teacher\'s comment. >> CORRECT! Every day, I read the comment carefully, and I try to change my bad habit in speaking English.>> CORRECT! I have a limit on studying English by SKYPE because we can\'t meet man-to-man. >> I have a limit on studying English by Skype, because we can\'t meet man-to-man. (You forgot to put a COMMA before BECAUSE.) >> I have a limit on studying English by Skype, because we can\'t meet face-to-face. In this case, I only can\'t help to depend on teacher\'s advice. >> CORRECT! I think teacher\'s grades must be objective and realistic so that students can know whether their level reached their goal or not. >> I think teacher\'s grades must be objective and realistic, so that students can know whether their level reached their goals or not. (You forgot to put a COMMA before SO. You started with plural nouns, so end with plural nouns.)