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Dear my go-ahead Teacher Paula, Good day. Today is Wednesday. How quickly time flies! I hope you can spend a nice time at the end of this year. See you soon. [이름] *Essay I prefer to travel with my friends or boyfriend. When I was in China, I took a trip with some of my friends. At that time, I didn't have enough money, so I had been exhausted. My journey was complex and hard, but looking back, it was a wonderful time that I never forget for the rest of my life. I also take a trip with my boyfriend every summer vacation. Before we leave on a trip, I set a travel plans in detail to save our time and money. It is a troublesome work, but I feel worth planning. Taking a trip led by a tour guide is convenient and safe, but there is a limit on freedom. Every one has their own tastes for the place of travel. Therefore, to make terrific memories, I would like to recommend a free traveling, not led by a tour guide.

Dear my sympathetic Student [이름],   A marvelous day to you! ^^ I am really puzzled about the word your used to describe me. Hahaha ~~~ ^^ Why do you think that I am a go-ahead person? I think I am not really like that, but thank you for saying so.   I agree with you that time flies rapidly. I also think like that. However, I feel a little regret. Because time flies too fast, I think I haven\'t done the things I should have achieved. I suddenly think that I am bad. T.T On the other hand, I am happy because I am going closer to a brighter future. ^^   I also hope for you to have a great time for the left days before the new year comes.   See you! ^^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~   P.S.: About your composition, I like it. It is because I noticed that we are somehow alike. I also like traveling with my friends. However, I don\'t plan for any of our travels. I just like joining and following. Planning is not my thing. Anyway, don\'t forget to see the corrections and suggestions for your writing improvement! ^^ Enjoy reading! ^^     Dear my go-ahead Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Good day. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Good day! ^^ Today is Wednesday. >> CORRECT! How quickly time flies!>> CORRECT! I hope you can spend a nice time at the end of this year.>> CORRECT! See you soon. >> CORRECT! >> OR: See you! [이름] >> CORRECT! *Essay I prefer to travel with my friends or boyfriend. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I prefer to travel with my friends and my boyfriend. When I was in China, I took a trip with some of my friends. >> CORRECT! At that time, I didn\'t have enough money, so I had been exhausted. >> CORRECT! My journey was complex and hard, but looking back, it was a wonderful time that I never forget for the rest of my life. >> My journey was complex and hard, but looking back, it was a wonderful time that I will never forget for the rest of my life. (I WILL NEVER FORGET means until the future. I NEVER FORGET means a fact in the present.) I also take a trip with my boyfriend every summer vacation. >> CORRECT! Before we leave on a trip, I set a travel plans in detail to save our time and money. >> Before we leave on a trip, I set a travel plan in detail to save our time and money. (A TRAVEL PLANS should be A TRAVEL PLAN or TRAVEL PLANS.) >> OR: Before we leave on a trip, I set an itinerary to save our time and money. It is a troublesome work, but I feel worth planning. >> CORRECT! >> OR: It is a troublesome work, but I feel it is worth planning. Taking a trip led by a tour guide is convenient and safe, but there is a limit on freedom. >> CORRECT! Every one has their own tastes for the place of travel. >> Every one has his or her own taste for the place to travel. (EVERY ONE is singular, so you can\'t use THEIR.) >> OR: Everyone has his or her own taste for the place to travel. Therefore, to make terrific memories, I would like to recommend a free traveling, not led by a tour guide. >> CORRECT!