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Dear my sensible Teacher Paula, Hi. Today, Excessive work made me exhausted, because my boss came back from his business trip. However, I already know what I should do in my current position, so I am willing to accept that. *ESSAY I only specialized in Chinese language. Now, I think I should have minored in another subject. I really regret that I only majored in Chinese language to get a good grade. I don't know why I though like that, but at that time, I really wanted to get a scholarship. I might have wanted to help my mother lighten the burden of school expenses. Of course, I attended a Chinese university on an exchange scholarship for a year, and it was a very useful time for me to speak Chinese fluently. This is an only advantage of specializing in one subject. If I went back to the university life, I would do a double major in Chinese language and welfare. In short, it will be good for young people to experience variety academics when they are available.

Dear my considerate Student [이름],   A beautiful Thursday to you! ^^   I am puzzled again. I want to know why you consider me as a sensible person. I am not good at making judgements.   Anyway, I really admire you for being a strong woman. You are always welcome to any kinds of challenges. I am trying to be like you. We can do it. Of course, we can. However, I hope you won\'t have a lot of stressful tasks to do.   By the way, about your composition, thank you for writing it with heart. I can feel what you felt when you were doing your homework. However, you must remove the feeling of regrets. You can\'t really change the past. You can imagine it, but I think it is not yet too late for you to take up Welfare.   That\'s all for now! ^^ See you! ^^, Enjoy reading! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my sensible Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Hi. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Hi!Today, Excessive work made me exhausted, because my boss came back from his business trip.>> Today, excessive work made me exhausted, because my boss came back from his business trip. (The first letter of EXCESSIVE should be in lower case or small letter.) However, I already know what I should do in my current position, so I am willing to accept that. >> CORRECT!   *ESSAY I only specialized in Chinese language.>> I only speciallized in Chinese Language. (When we talk about majors, the first letters of the words should be in capital letter.) Now, I think I should have minored in another subject. >> CORRECT! I really regret that I only majored in Chinese language to get a good grade. >> I really regret that I only majored in Chinese Language to get a good grade. (When we talk about majors, the first letters of the words should be in capital letter.) I don\'t know why I though like that, but at that time, I really wanted to get a scholarship. >> I don\'t know why I thought like that, but at that time, I really wanted to get a scholarship. (I think THOUGH should be THOUGHT.) I might have wanted to help my mother lighten the burden of school expenses. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I might have helped my mother lighten the burden of school expenses. Of course, I attended a Chinese university on an exchange scholarship for a year, and it was a very useful time for me to speak Chinese fluently. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Of course, I attended a Chinese university on an exchange scholarship program, and it was a very useful time for me to speak Chinese fluently. >> OR: Of course, I attended a Chinese university as an exchange student, and it was a very useful time for me to speak Chinese fluently. This is an only advantage of specializing in one subject. >> This is the only advantage of specializing in one subject. (ONLY is a specific idea in the sentence, so THE should be used in front of it.) If I went back to the university life, I would do a double major in Chinese language and welfare. >> If I went back to the same university life I had before, I would do a double major in Chinese Language and Welfare. (You need to make your sentence more specific by making it longer.) >> OR: If I went back to the same university life I had before, I would have a double major in Chinese Language and Welfare. In short, it will be good for young people to experience variety academics when they are available. >> In short, it will be good for young people to experience variety of academics when they are available. (PATTERN: variety of something) >> OR: In short, it will be good for young people to experience various academic programs when they are available.