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Dear my unswerving Student [이름],

A fantastic day to the both of us! ^.^

Happy Tuesday! ^^

To start, I would like to say thank you for sharing things about your personal life through writing.

I really appreciate your openness.

Thank you so much! ^^

To answer your question, December 25 and 30 are considered as regular holidays due to Christmas and Rizal Days respectively.

In addition, December 24 and 31 are special non-working holidays here in the Philippines, because on these days, Christmas Eve and Last Day of the Year are celebrated.

Suddenly, I am looking forward of your plans for this month.

I know that you will have a terrific arrangements.

By the way, about your composition, I totally agree with you when you said that group work is as hard as individual work.

Both of them has advantages and disadvantages.

I consider them both very important.

However, in my case, I prefer working independently.

That\'s all for now! ^^

See you soon! ^.^

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my reliable Teacher Paula,
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Good day.
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Thank you for sharing your story, and I am also happy that you had a great time.
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By the way, would you let me know about the national holidays of this month in the Philippines?
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>> OR: By the way, would you let me know about the national holidays for this month in the Philippines?

I want to adjust my vacation depending on your holidays. ^^
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See you.
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*Essay

In my case, I work independently at my work, and no one interferes what I do.
>> In my case, I work independently at my work, and no one interferes in what I do.

I usually do my tasks depending on the logic of our business, and it has been doing well until now.
>> I usually do my tasks depending on the logic of our business, and I have been doing them well until now. (HAVE BEEN + V-ING is used in an active voice. It means that the subject receives the action.)

>> OR: I usually do my tasks depending on the logic of our business, and they have been done well by me until now.

However, sometimes when I face some serious problems on my works, no one helps me to judge it, and all of things are entirely my responsibility.
>> However, sometimes, when I face some serious problems on my work, no one helps me to judge it, and all of things are entirely my responsibility. (There should be a comma after SOMETIMES. WORK in your sentence refers to your duties, so it is uncountable.)

Sometimes, I think that I wish I had an immediate superior who can advise me.
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>> OR: Sometimes, I think that I wish I had an immediate superior who can give me some pieces of advice.

Of course, working with a group of people is as hard as working independently.
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They have to canvass many people\'s opinions, and it is a very complicated progress to draw a conclusion.
>> They have to canvass many people\'s opinions, and it is a very complicated process to draw a conclusion. (I think PROGRESS ahould be PROCESS.)

Consequentially, it is the only way to adapt well to each different working environment.

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