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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear Sir,
Good Morning!
I'm Kyun[이름] Yu from financing deparment of behr korea.
Please give me a Role as seen below.
I don't have authorize now and I can't somthing to do .
Thank you for your help!
강사 첨삭
Hello there! Kindly review your composition and remember some corrections.
Dear Sir:
>>correct
Good Morning!
>>correct
I'm Kyun[이름] Yu from financing deparment of behr korea.
>>I’m Kyun[이름] Yu from the Financing Department of BEHR Korea.
Please give me a Role as seen below.
>>Please give me a role.
>>OR: Please give me something to do.
I don't have authorize now and I can't somthing to do .
>>I don’t have an authorization now and I can’t do anything.
Thank you for your help!
>>correct
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