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Hi there, [이름]! ^.^

A glorious Monday to both of us! ^^

You are right!

I really had a busy weekend.

Fortunately, I enjoyed it.

Last Saturday morning until afternoon, I was the only one who took care of my younger brother\'s baby girl.

In the evening, my family and I prepared for some foods for the birthday I told you last Friday.

It was great.

While preparing for them, I had a great time talking with my mom, my younger sister and my younger brother\'s wife.

It was really great! ^^

However, we slept very late that night.

Yesterday, we cooked the foods before going to the picnic area where the birthday was held.

My brother-in-law fetch us at home.

He brought his pick up, so there was a lot of space for us and the things we needed to bring at the party.

When we arrived there, we were surprised, because the birthday celebrant was wearing a beautiful gown and a crown made of white flowers.

She looked like a princess that time.

We couldn\'t believe it.

We thought she didn\'t like wearing dresses and the like.

Anyway, as a whole, it ended fantastically.

All left with smiles on their faces, especially my older sister\'s daughter who is the birthday girl.

By the way, if I am a good aunt, you are a fantastic friend and an aunt too.

I know that you and your boyfriend took care of your friend\'s twins very well.

I am just very curious of your appearance that time.

Hahaha! ^^

Kidding! ^.^

I am really glad that after your babysitting time, when you saw the twins smiling and waving at you, your tiredness disappeared.

I also have the same feeling, when my nieces do those gestures to me.

Well! ^^

I can surely say that both of us had a busy but wonderful weekend.

Anyway, see you later! ^.^

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Good morning, Paula!
>> CORRECT!

I think you spent busy days on last weekend because of preparing your niece\'s birthday.

>> I think you spent busy days last weekend because of preparing for your niece\'s birthday. (There\'s no need to put ON before LAST WEEKEND.)

>> OR: I think you spent busy days last weekend because of your niece\'s birthday preparation.

You are a very good aunt.^^
>> CORRECT!

In my case, I attended my male friend\'s wedding, but I could not enjoy his wedding to the fullest.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: In my case, I attended my male friend\'s wedding, but I could not enjoy the event to the fullest.

It is because my boyfriend and I had to be a babysitter for my female friend\'s babies.
>> It is because my boyfriend and I had to be babysitters for my female friend\'s babies. (MY BOYFRIEND AND I are more than ONE, so you can\'t say A BABYSITTER.) 

She has twins, and her husband had another wedding schedule, so he didn\'t accompany my friend and their babies to the wedding.
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I was out of my mind while I took care of one of twins, and I could not remember how nice the wedding was.
>> I was out of my mind while I took care of one of the twins, and I could not remember how nice the wedding was. (ONE OF THE is a fixed pattern.)

I said hello to the groom only for a second, I had to concentrate on a baby again.
>> I said hello to the groom only for a second, I had to concentrate on the baby again. (Use THE not A before BABY since you already introduced BABY more than once.)

>> OR: I said hello to the groom only for a second, I had to concentrate on the baby I was taking care of again.

Moreover, even after wedding, we had to wait for her husband to come for a long time.
>> CORRECT!

It has been a long day for me and my boyfriend.
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However, when we said good-by to each other, twins smiled at me and waved to me.
>> However, when we said goodbye to each other, the twins smiled at me and waved to me. (GOOD-BY should be GOODBYE.)

>> OR: However, when we said goodbye to each other, the twins smiled and waved at me.  

At that time, suddenly I could get over feeling tired.
>> At that time, suddenly, I could get over the feeling of being tired. (There should be a COMMA after the SUDDENLY. THE FEELING OF SOMETHING is a fixed pattern.)

>> OR: At that time, suddenly, I could get over the feeling of tiredness.

>> OR: At that time, suddenly, I could get over my tiredness.

Do you also feel like I do whenever you take care of your niece?

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: Do you also feel like I do whenever you take care of your nieces?