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2011-03-14 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear [Name]. [Name], Good morning! I have some questions. I can't post invoice of Develop cost in 2008. The warning message is "Transaction CO Through - posting from FI has been locked" This cost was contained 2010 cost in Nam[이름] system. So I think that posting date will be 2010.12.31. If I choose today posting date it is Okay. Can I use today posting date??? I'm looking forward for your reply. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hello there^^ Thank you so much for this composition. You can write very well. I hope some alterations in your sentences will help you.

Have a nice day^^

T. Camille

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>>Composition

Dear [Name]. [Name]:

>>Correct
Good morning!
>>Correct
I have some questions. 
>>Correct.

>>I have some questions to ask.
I can't post invoice of Develop cost in 2008.
>>I can뭪 post the invoice of development cost in 2008.
The warning message is "Transaction CO Through - posting from FI has been locked" 
>>The warning message says "Transaction CO Through - posting from FI has been locked" 
This cost was contained 2010 cost in Nam[이름] system.
>>This costs are contained in  the 2010 costs in the Nam[이름] system.
So I think that posting date will be 2010.12.31.
>>So, I think the posting date will be on December 31, 2010.
If I choose today posting date it is Okay.
>>If I choose today as a posting date, will it be okay?

>>Is it okay if I choose today as it뭩 posting date?
Can I use today posting date???
>>Can I use this day as a positing date?
I'm looking forward for your reply.

>>correct
>>I뭢 lokking forwrad to your reply.
Thank you.

>>Correct

>>Thank you very much

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