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Dear [Name].Ziehr,
Good morning!
I have some questions about Red messages from MIRO.
I can't post Woochang .
I held woochang last Friday. Because amount was not match.
And I call it that held data today. Finally, amount is match!.
But I can't post Woochang .
You can find Red messages from MIRO as seen below.
Would you please give me a solution??
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Dear [Name].Ziehr,>> Dear [Name]. [Name]:Good morning!
>>Correct!I have some questions about Red messages from MIRO.
>> I have some questions about Red messages in MIRO.I can't post Woochang .
>> I cannot post Woochang.I held woochang last Friday. Because amount was not match.
>> I held woochang last Friday because the amount did not match.And I call it that held data today. Finally, amount is match!.
>>I called the held data today and finally, the amount matched.But I can't post Woochang .
>> But, I cannot post Woochang.You can find Red messages from MIRO as seen below.
>> Correct!Would you please give me a solution??
>> Would you please give me a solution to this?
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