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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name].Ziehr,
Good morning!
I have some questions about Red messages from MIRO.
I can't post Woochang .
I held woochang last Friday. Because amount was not match.
And I call it that held data today. Finally, amount is match!.
But I can't post Woochang .
You can find Red messages from MIRO as seen below.
Would you please give me a solution??
thank you.
강사 첨삭
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Dear [Name].Ziehr,>>correctGood morning!>>correctI have some questions about Red messages from MIRO.>>I have some questions about the Red messages from MIRO.I can't post Woochang .>>correctI held woochang last Friday. Because amount was not match.>>I held Woochang last Friday because the amount didn’t match.And I call it that held data today.
>>In addition, I called today because of that held data.
Finally, amount is match!.>>Finally, the amount matched.But I can't post Woochang .>>However, I still can’t post WoochangYou can find Red messages from MIRO as seen below.>>You can find the RED messages from MIRO as shown below.Would you please give me a solution??>>correctthank you.
>>Thank you.
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