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Hi my attentive Student [이름]! ^.^

Happy Tuesday! ^^

Thank you for telling me your feelings about my letter to you! ^^

I am glad that you can feel what I felt last weekend.

It means I am effectively expresses my thoughts by writing.

Hahaha! ^^

I also feel delighted that you feel happy and warm through my reply.

I hope I can make you feel positively with my compositions.

Well!

I agree that I have the most precious thing in the world that can\'t be bought with money.

I am really proud that I am in a family that has time for gatherings and bonding.

Though it is not really always, I still enjoy being at home with my father, mother, younger sister and her daughter and younger bother and his family.

Our home is small, but it is enough for our big family.

Having quality time with our families is really very important.

We can do a lot of things with them.

We can have crazy talks and games.

Some secrets might be revealed.

Therefore, I really hope you can meet your family more often.

I heard that people in Korea really give more time to their work than their families.

It\'s really a sad thing.

However, this kind of lifestyle can be changed.

Nothing is too late when you act now.

I know that you will have an amazing moment with your family in New Year.

Start the year 2015 right.

If possible, plan to meet your family more often.

Anyway, I hope you enjoy reading this letter.

See you! ^^

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Hello, my Teacher Paula,
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>> OR: Hello my Teacher Paula!

Good morning.
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>> OR: Good morning!

Through your writings, I can feel that you had a wonderful weekend, and you are living happily together.
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>> OR: Through your writings, I can feel that you had a wonderful weekend, and you are living happily together with your family.

Your reply makes me also feel happy and warm-hearted.
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I think you have the most precious thing that we cannot buy with money in the world.
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You must be proud of them. ^^
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Here in Korea, nowadays, there are no many chances for family to get together and enjoy the time.
>> Here in Korea, nowadays, there are no many chances for families to get together and enjoy quality time with each other. (We usually don\'t put THE before TIME since it is your first time to mention it in your composition.)

In my case, I also don\'t go to Busan very often, and it makes me feel sense of distance with my family.
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>> OR: In my case, I also don\'t go to Busan very often, and it makes me have homesickness.

I don\'t know when I started feeling like that, but I am already accustomed with this kind of life style, so it is hard to change.
>> I don\'t know when I started feeling like that, but I am already accustomed with this kind of lifestyle, so it is hard to change. (LIFESTYLE is only one word.)

However, I think I should change my mind and try to make a wonderful time with my family.
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No matter how busy I am, I should care about them.
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This New Year, I am going to be with my family.
>> This coming New Year, I am going to be with my family. (THIS NEW YEAR means the first day of 2014.)

>> OR: In New Year, I am going to be with my family.

I hope you can also have a great time with your family for the rest of this year. ^^
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See you later.
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>> OR: See you later!

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