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Good morning, my Teacher Paula, Here in Korea, today's temperature is negative 13 degrees Celsius, and sensory temperature is negative 20 degrees Celsius. Before I left my home, I wore many pieces of thin clothes, so now I am a little uncomfortable to move. It is so cold that my house's window is frozen, and I cannot open it. Even if how cold it is, I need to ventilate the room once a day, but now it is impossible to do that. Now, I am typing my writing in my office, I almost lost feeling in my hands. Fortunately, my feet are lucky since I am using an electronic pad to warm them. I think I should blow on my hands to keep them warm while I am working. See you later. P.S) How is the word 'spectator' different from the word 'audience'? I cannot tell the difference between the two words. ^^;; Please help me to explain that.

Hi there, my diligent Student [이름]! ^.^   My favorite day is here again. I feel so great, most especially because I had a terrific rest this morning. ^^ My private student cancelled our class. Hahaha! ^^ Anyways, I hope you feel the same thing. ^.^   OMG! It\'s very cold there, but there\'s something I don\'t understand clearly. What is sensory temperature? By the way, today, here in Baguio City, Philippines, the temperature when the sun is high is 24 degrees Celsius, and when the sun is down, it is 15 degrees Celsius. Your place is very cold, I think. However, it is okay, because you know how to keep yourself warm. I just feel sad, because you move a little uncomfortably because of what you are wearing now. Anyway, you should endure that since you planned to do it. There are always consequences when we do something. Fortunately, just like what you said in your writing, your feet are lucky. That information somehow lessen my worries about your condition. Just a suggestion. Why don\'t you use winter gloves?   Anyway, see you very soon! ^.^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~   P.S.: About the difference between \'spectator\' and \'audience\'. From my dictionary, spectator is a person who is watching an event, especially a sports event while audience is the group of people who have gathered to watch or listen to something like a play, concert, somebody speaking, etc. I hope this information can help you understand the difference between those two words. ^^   Good morning, my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! >> OR: Good morning, my Teacher Paula!Here in Korea, today\'s temperature is negative 13 degrees Celsius, and sensory temperature is negative 20 degrees Celsius.>> CORRECT! Before I left my home, I wore many pieces of thin clothes, so now I am a little uncomfortable to move. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Before, I left my home, I wore many pieces of thin clothes, so now I move a little uncomfortably. It is so cold that my house\'s window is frozen, and I cannot open it. >> CORRECT! >> OR: It is so cold that my house\'s windows are frozen. As a result, I can\'t open them. Even if how cold it is, I need to ventilate the room once a day, but now it is impossible to do that.>> CORRECT! Now, I am typing my writing in my office, I almost lost feeling in my hands. >> Now, I am typing my writing in my office, I almost lose feeling in my hands. (Since you use NOW, verbs should be in present simple or present continuous form.) >> Now, I am typing my writing in my office, my hands are almost numb. Fortunately, my feet are lucky since I am using an electronic pad to warm them. >> CORRECT! I think I should blow on my hands to keep them warm while I am working.>> I think I should blow my hands to keep them warm while I am working. (BLOW ON means to defame or discredit a person, so this is not an appropriate expression to include in your sentence. Instead of BLOW ON, it should only be BLOW.) See you later. >> CORRECT! >> OR: See you later! P.S) How is the word \'spectator\' different from the word \'audience\'? >> P.S.: How is the word \'spectator\' different from the word \'audience\'? (After S, there should be a period and a colon.) I cannot tell the difference between the two words. ^^;;>> CORRECT! >> OR: I can\'t tell the difference between those two words. Please help me to explain that. >> CORRECT!