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2011-03-14 · 첨삭 강사 Whitney

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Dear [Name]. [Name], Good afternoon! I have some questions about account no. Here is invoice for audit fee of Quality as below. Mr. [Name] said that invoice is correct. I have to book in SAP. Cost center is 220068. But I don't know Account no. So, would you please give me a information about account no?? I found account no. of audit fees in SAP. I'm looking forward for your reply. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hi Bella! Here are your corrections:


Dear [Name]. [Name],

>> CORRECT.

Good afternoon!

>> CORRECT.


I have some questions about account no.

>> I have some questions about an account no.

Here is invoice for audit fee of Quality as below.

>> Below is the invoice of the Quality뭩 Audit Fee:

Mr. [Name] said that invoice is correct.

>>Mr. [Name] said that the invoice is correct.

I have to book in SAP. Cost center is 220068. But I don't know Account no.

>> I have to book it in SAP. The cost center is 220068. However, I don't know the Account no.

So, would you please give me a information about account no??

>> Kindly please provide an information about the account number?

I found account no. of audit fees in SAP.

>> I found an account no. of the audit fees in SAP.


I'm looking forward for your reply.

>> CORRECT.

Thank you.

>> CORRECT.

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