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Hi my lovable Student [이름]! ^.^

A thankful Thursday to you! ^^

Thank you very much for explaining what sensory temperature is! ^^,

Frankly speaking, I know it\'s meaning.

However, I just want to know how you will explain about it.

Well!

You did great at making the said matter clear.

I really appreciate it.

I hope I didn\'t annoy you. ^^.

By the way, I also feel like it is colder today than yesterday.

My skin is drier now.

Unfortunately, I forgot my moisturizer at home.

I hope my skin will still be fine.

I think I would also think like the changing of the seasons could bother me.

I would also need to change my clothes whenever the seasons change.

On the other hand, I envy you for you can experience four seasons.

Anyway, I think you were really in a hurry when you did your writing.

You forgot to put your name at the bottom of your letter.

Hahaha! ^^

That\'s all for now! ^.^

See you very soon! ^^

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Good morning, my Teacher Paula,
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>> OR: Good morning, my Teacher Paula!
I just checked yesterday\'s composition, and I found that you could not understand sensory temperature.
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What I wanted to explain to you is that yesterday\'s temperature was negative 13 degrees Celsius, but it felt like negative 20 degrees Celsius.
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Anyway, it is still cold today, even it is colder than yesterday.
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I am really sick and tired of this kind of cold weather.
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When I am getting older, I feel that every 4 seasons bother me.
>> When I am getting older, I feel that every season bothers me. (Singular noun should go after EVERY.)

>> OR: When I am getting older, I feel that all the four seasons bother me.

Whenever the season changes, I have to put my unseasonal clothes away and take out my clothes which are suitable for the season.
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Every season even brings me different skin conditions.
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In this winter season, I have to drink so much more water to keep my skin moist.
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>> OR: This winter season, I have to drink really a lot of water to keep my skin moist.

Otherwise, I might look 10years older than my real age. Ha Ha Ha.
>> Otherwise, I might look 10 years older than my real age. Hahaha! (There should be a space after 10.)

Even if it makes me go to the bathroom very often, I cannot give up drinking water.
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Now, I\'ve got to go to the bathroom. Hahaha ^^;;
>> Now, I\'ve got to go to the bathroom. Hahaha! (You forgot to put an exclamation mark after HAHAHA.)

See you very soon.

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