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2014-12-19 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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Dear my Teacher Paula, Happy Friday! No matter how busy I am at my work, I should not skip checking your reply. You said that 80% of our class time should be I talking, and I agree with your opinion. I am also trying to become talkative, but it is a little hard for me so far. However, if you ask me more questions than before, I might become talkative at some time. I am willing to accept your constant questions. We only have a limit of 20 minutes of time a day, so I am also very nervous. Every day, I think what if I don't do performance well in our class. You have many teaching experiences, and you will know about my hardness. Anyway, I really like your teaching method, and I want to keep this kind of conversation. I hope you can lead me to talk a lot. See you later.

강사 첨삭

To my dearest Student [이름],

 

Today is indeed a happy Friday.

I am happy, and I think you are happy too.

Hahaha! ^^

Let\'s own this day! ^.^

 

I\'m glad that you are my student.

You know your responsibilities.

About you being talkative in our class, I really want you to be like that.

I will give you more questions next time.

Hahaha! ^^

You need to prepare for my wrath for teaching. ^^

 

Frankly speaking, you always do well in our classes.

You always amaze me through your sharing.

I hope I can continue satisfy you in our classes.

Don\'t worry.

I will try my best to help you in doing what you want to achieve.

 

Anyway, see you soon! ^^

 

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

 

 

Dear my Teacher Paula,
>> CORRECT!
Happy Friday!
>> CORRECT!

No matter how busy I am at my work, I should not skip checking your reply.
>> CORRECT!

You said that 80% of our class time should be I talking, and I agree with your opinion.
>> CORRECT!

I am also trying to become talkative, but it is a little hard for me so far.
>> CORRECT!

However, if you ask me more questions than before, I might become talkative at some time.
>> CORRECT!

I am willing to accept your constant questions.
>> CORRECT!

We only have a limit of 20 minutes of time a day, so I am also very nervous.
>> CORRECT!

Every day, I think what if I don\'t do performance well in our class.
>> Every day, I think what if I don\'t perform well in our class. (It seems like it is already redundant of DO and PERFORMANCE are used in one sentence.)

>> OR: Every day, I think what if I don\'t do well in our class.

>> OR: Every day, I think what if I don\'t give a good performance in our class.

You have many teaching experiences, and you will know about my hardness.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: You have many teaching experiences, and you will know about my difficulties.

Anyway, I really like your teaching method, and I want to keep this kind of conversation.
>> CORRECT!

I hope you can lead me to talk a lot.
>> CORRECT!

See you later.

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: See you later!

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