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Good afternoon, my teacher Paula, How about your holiday? I heard that you took a day off yesterday, and I also came back from my personal trip yesterday. I went to Gangwon Province in Korea to go snowboarding during three days and two nights. I had a wonderful time during my trip, but my body is still sore because I fell down a lot while I was going snowboarding. Now, I cannot raise my two arms because of the muscle pain. However, even if I still have a muscle pain, I won't give up the pleasure of the winter sport. Anyway, I am sure that you also had a wonderful time with your family during your holidays. I am expecting for our class tonight. See you soon. [이름]

Hi there, my alluring Student [이름]! ^.^ Happy Tuesday! ^^   Good evening! *.* To start, let me say sorry for my absence yesterday. I am really sorry. T.T   Anyway, I can say that I had a great and long holiday. It was tiring and fun. Until now, my body also is still sore just like you.   You are somehow right about my status yesterday. Frankly speaking, I was considered absent yesterday. From this week until next week, Power English teachers shouldn\'t be absent or go on days off. Our management has given us plenty of considerations about our holidays here in the Philippines. We had an agreement that if possible, everyone should go to work except on our holidays. By the way, we won\'t be having classes on December 25, 2014, December 31, 2014, January 1, 2015 and January 2, 2015. Suddenly, I envy you. I think snowboarding is really fun. I haven\'t tried it. Of course, in the future, I will experience it. Hahaha! ^^   Well! When you do sport activities, you should be ready to some consequences. One of them is a muscle pain. Just a suggestion. You need to have a massage to relax your body.   In addition, don\'t worry! ^^ I am present for our class today! ^.^   See you very very soon! *.*   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Good afternoon, my teacher Paula,>> CORRECT! How about your holiday? >> CORRECT! >> OR: How was your holiday? I heard that you took a day off yesterday, and I also came back from my personal trip yesterday. >> CORRECT! I went to Gangwon Province in Korea to go snowboarding during three days and two nights. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I went to Gangwon Province, Korea to go snowboarding during three days and two nights. I had a wonderful time during my trip, but my body is still sore because I fell down a lot while I was going snowboarding. >> I had a wonderful time during my trip, but my body is still sore, because I fell down a lot while I was going snowboarding. (Don\'t forget to put a COMMA before BECAUSE since you are connecting two sentences.) Now, I cannot raise my two arms because of the muscle pain. >> Now, I cannot raise my arms because of a muscle pain. (It is better not to put TWO, because a human only have two arms. Don\'t put THE if it just your first time to mention a word or phrase.) However, even if I still have a muscle pain, I won\'t give up the pleasure of the winter sport. >> However, even if I still have the muscle pain, I won\'t give up the pleasure of the winter sport. (This time, since MUSCLE PAIN is used again, THE can be used.) Anyway, I am sure that you also had a wonderful time with your family during your holidays. >> CORRECT! I am expecting for our class tonight. >> CORRECT! See you soon. >> CORRECT! >> OR: See you soon! [이름] >> CORRECT!