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Hello my sporty Student [이름]! ^.^
Happy Wednesday! ^^
Merry Christmas!!! ~~~ ^.~
About my condition yesterday, you are totally right.
Frankly speaking, until now, I am still tired.
I think you noticed it during our class.
I am sorry.
I am really trying my best not to make you see my negative conditions.
Fortunately, you are my student.
You really are considerate.
I love you very much! ^^
By the way, don\'t worry about my health and personnel evaluation.
Everything is fine.
I assure you of that.
Anyway, I hope you to have a glorious Christmas Eve and Day! ^^
See you on Friday! ^^,
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
P.S.: About your question, both January three and January third are correct.
I am just more comfortable with the first one.
You can also say the third day of January or the third day of the month of January.
Hi, my Teacher Paula,
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: Hi, my Teacher Paula!
>> OR: Hi my Teacher Paula!
Good morning.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: Good morning!
I really enjoyed reading your reply, and thank you for sharing your holiday\'s life.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I really enjoyed reading your reply, and thank you for sharing your holiday whereabouts.
You looked indeed tired because of your cousin\'s wedding; on the other hand, you seemed to be very happy and pleased.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: You looked indeed tired because of your cousin\'s wedding. On the other hand, you seemed to be very happy and pleased.
However, I worried about your health and personnel evaluation.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: However, I was worried about your health and personnel evaluation.
As you mentioned on your reply, Power English does not allow teachers to go on days off during the end of this month, but you couldn\'t help to be absence because of your unavoidable situation.
>> As you mentioned on your reply, Power English does not allow teachers to go on days off until the end of this month, but you couldn\'t help to be absent because of your unavoidable situation. (You should be careful what form of a word you should use in a sentence.)
>> OR: As you mentioned on your reply, Power English does not allow teachers to go on days off until the end of this month, but you couldn\'t help to be have an absence because of your unavoidable situation.
>> OR: As you mentioned on your reply, Power English does not allow teachers to go on days off until the end of this month, but you couldn\'t help to be an absentee because of your unavoidable situation.
Don\'t worry about me, I understand you and accept your absence which it just happens sometimes.
>> Don\'t worry about me, I understand you and accept your absence which just happens sometimes. (When you connect two sentences with WHICH, it means WHICH replaces the subject in the second sentence. Therefore, in your statement, WHICH already replaced IT, so there\'s no need to put IT there.)
Anyway, Tomorrow is Charismas,I hope you can relax with your family to the fullest.
>> Anyway, tomorrow is Christmas, I hope you can relax with your family to the fullest. (T in TOMORROW should be in lowercase from. Be careful with the spelling of CHRISTMAS. Put a space after a COMMA.)
See you soon.^^
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: See you soon!
P.S.: I just reviewed our last class, and I was wondering how to read about \'January 3\'.
>> P.S.: I just reviewed our last class, and I was wondering about how to read \'January 3\'. (PATTERN: wonder about something. )
You pronounced that as January three, so I am a little confused about it.
>> CORRECT!
Which one is correct between January three and January third?
>> CORRECT!
I am awaiting your answer. ^^
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I am waiting for your answer.
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