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Dear my admirable Student [이름],

Good evening! ^.^

Happy Friday! ^^

I spent a great Christmas with my family.

On Christmas Eve, my family and I waited for midnight to come.

At midnight, we sang some Christmas carols.

After singing, we prayed for our good health and blessings.

We also greeted Christ for his birthday.

After eating, we chatted while watching a movie.

Then, we fixed our things and slept.

In the morning of December 25, we cleaned our house for the coming of our relatives.

We did the same thing that we had at midnight of Christmas.

Hahaha! ^^

It was really great.

I ate a lot of delicious food.

However, I am a little worried.

The gown that I will wear this coming Saturday might not fit me.

Hahaha! ^^

I think I gained a lot of weight.

I feel my body is bigger now.

OMG! ~~~ ^^

That\'s my Christmas Day whereabouts.

Thank you for sharing the things about you last Christmas.

By the way, you really need to plan for your long holiday.

In addition, don\'t worry.

I will be more supportive from now on! ^.^

Anyway, see you on Monday! ^^

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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Good day.
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>> OR: Good day!

Did you spend a nice time yesterday?
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>> OR: Did you have a nice time yesterday?

>> OR: Did you have a nice Christmas?

In my case, I did my laundry and watched several movies while i stayed home
>> In my case, I did my laundry and watched several movies while I stayed home. (You forgot to put \"I\" in capital. You also forgot to put a dot at the end of your sentence.)

As I just informed you before, Christmas means nothing to me; it is just the day that I don\'t have to go to work. Ha Ha Ha
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>> OR: As I just informed you before, Christmas means nothing to me. It is just the day that I don\'t have to go to work.

Today is my last working day of this year, so I was happy and felt light on my feet when I left for my office in this morning.
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>> OR: Today is my last working day this year, so I was happy and felt light on my feet when I left from my office this morning.

My official days off are from December 29th to January 2nd.
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I should take advantage of this time and make plans for next year.
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Looking back at this year, I have tried to do my best to live well, but the result is not that good.
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I am going to catch up on my plans which have not been completed until now.
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Leveling my English skill up is also one of those things what I ever planed.

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>> OR: Leveling my English skills up is also one of those things that I ever planned.

>> OR: Leveling my English skills up is also one of those what I ever planned.

I hope I can be supportive from you as ever in the New Year, and thanks for teaching me very hard.
>> I hope I can be supported by you as ever in the New Year, and thanks for teaching me very hard. (Since you receive the action, you should use be + pp.)

>> OR: I hope you can still be supportive to me as ever in the New Year, and thanks for teaching me very hard.

See you later.
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>> OR: See you later!

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